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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - v on June 13, 2010
    I really like the idea of continuing on, I love that its an epic story..i'm a little worried about Naruto and his lifespan but i love where your story has taken us so far so i'll just continue reading and hope for the best because each twist and turn is wonderful in of itself. :)
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  • From ANON - Kimberly on June 12, 2010
    This story is amazing to read and going through the last chapter i was sure it was going to end. So I"m very happy you are going to continue. I would suggest starting again from chapter 1. 92 chapters is already pretty epic and with when I was a new reader I had reservations about the story when I saw it was 40 chapters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2010
    Could you post it twice? i know for you that might get really annoying, but post the continuation with the current, and then post that same continutaion as a seperate story... but then again i'd bet that everyone who's reading this story will be willing to read the new post. it would be nice to see this reach 100 chapters though... either way i'm happy.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2010
    After 90 chapters, i cried when Shikamaru herld Haru. Thank you for your continuing updates and lovely story writing.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 12, 2010
    I don't know how others will perseive it but when I see a story that has alot of chapters it makes me want to read it. cause I am a fast reader and when I get hooked I don't stop till the end. The ideas you mentioned in the authors note seem good to me, I like the idea of stepping stones and the time skip.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From roro237 on June 12, 2010
    I'm in Fluffy-soft mode now:) That was amazing! It felt like the perfect ending to that part of their jouney. I love the ideas you have for giving us more:) Some one shot stepping stones along the way would be fantantic! Along with the new arc. 'Yea Baby'!! The new arc could go vol.2 or book 2 chapter one?! I'm good with whatever you deside on just as long as the story keeps going:) Thank you for the meaning of the names:) I loved everything in this chapter! I'm ~Bowing~ to the Queen of Naaruto Spacers:) Thank you for your hard work ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2010
    Start at chapter 1 of a new fic
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  • From RyuEarth on June 12, 2010
    I agree that Iruka would look so good in a kimono ^^

    And the names and the ceremony were very good!

    Thank you for the update!

    As for the second arc, because it is already such a long story already, beginning a new 'story' would probably be best. This is like the end of one time, and the second would be a beginning of a new story. However, that's just my thoughts on it. You can do whatever it is you want to do! =)
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  • From zaccheo on June 12, 2010
    I vote for a new story that states itself as a continuation of this story. Starting a new story is better because the story starting from here would have a different plot and intent than it's previous. Also, there would be people that could get scared off by the bulk of chapters.
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  • From cynaga on June 12, 2010
    Start a new story for the rest; especially after the time skip.
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  • From ANON - Kaliu6-san on June 12, 2010
    Personally, I think readers (me included) would want to know what kind of an epilogue you've thought up. So maybe you could post it in this one as sort of an alternative epilogue, or, depending on what exactly it contains, as a permanent epilogue - if it is something that could be the end of the story even if it is longer. Otherwise, I really think it would be better to start a new chapter as another story - if anything else, it wouldn't be so troublesome to scroll down every time I want to read the new chapter (the site always opens on chapter one).

    Anyway, anything you decide is ok with me - even if it ends here it was still a great story (one of my favourites, and trust me, I've read anything that sais sasunaru/narusasu) and I would gladly read it may times over.. when I finally find the time to do it XD

    Jaa!

    Oh, one more thing - what are the meanings of the names of the kits?
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  • From meowkuu2 on June 12, 2010
    I love it! Personally I wouldn't mind if you continue to chap 92 cause hey, i love to read the more chapters the better! ^________^ But I say just do what you're comfortable with, you have a loyal following
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  • From nivell on June 12, 2010
    Babies! How about writing an epilogue in the next chapters and then make a new post for the new arc? So that it won't deter potential readers from reading this story. But however way you put it, the summary is interesting enough to click on the story link!
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  • From Prism0467 on June 12, 2010
    1. This was beautiful, not a dry eye in the house. A fitting ending to an epic tale.

    2. I agree that reading a fic that already boasts 100 chapters is going to feel like assigned schoolwork for someone who doesn't know better. I think you should begin at chapter one of a new fic.

    3. If you decided to stop here I would not blame you. YOu have given your readers something generously epic for which we are grateful. We've learned a bit about writing style as well, I suspect.

    4. I hope you're published and on a best-seller list someday soon.
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  • From sesshabattousai on June 12, 2010
    I've read the whole thing and enjoyed it very much. i usually stay away from Naruto/Sasuke pairings, but this one pulled me in because you involved everyone. Nice job, I'm sad to see it end, I've looked forward to the updates. As far as an epic goes - I'm an epic writer myself. When i got to about 106 chapters I started a sequel (which just picked up where the first one left off) - more for my ease in handling the document than any other reason. People had no trouble picking up on the next section. Since you're setting it three years later i'dd say do the stepping stones as separate and then start a new fic for three years and onward but, that's just my opinion!
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