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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2010
    I'm all for you doing the time skip, but only if you resolve the issue of Itachi. In my opinion he still needs to come full circle and be made a part of the new Uchiha. I really like the idea of KD or the collector and him together, he can provide the intellectual stimulation of Shikamaru and the beauty he craves so much in Naruto and Sasuke. Itachi needs someone to show him he is a treasure and I think the collector can woe him and make him feel valued and not like some tainted person who has to be tolarated.

    I'm excited to see what a time skip will bring will Iruka and Kashi have thier own babies? Neji and Shika? Anko and Shino? What will happen with Tayuya Kono-kun Inari, will Sumaru become a champion of one of the crews, like Kisame and Naruto? So many possibilities I'm excited to see it all come together.
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  • From Prism0467 on June 02, 2010
    Wow! This was major! Kiba gets to stay, not that there was ever the possibility that he would not, and Sasuke and Naruto evolve a little more into the parents they want to become. It's so sweet!

    And yes, I would like to see this tale come to some conclusion. I recognize that you have put a great deal of effort into this. I think I speak for many when I state that it is greatly appreciated. You have taken us out of our world and into another.

    Hey, and if Kishimoto-sama can pull a time-skip, then why not? ^_^
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  • From cynaga on June 02, 2010
    WHAT DO YOU MEAN IF WE WANT THE STORY TO CONTINUE~!?

    Sorry for shouting but with 600 reviews and 570 ratings, is there any doubt at all?

    OMG OMG OMG Naruto with Sasuke in missionary position is so LOVELY.


    any thoughts about making a pdf available (justa sking).
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  • From bob665 on June 02, 2010
    I've sort of been looking forward to chapter 62 largely because of its title and I have to say I like his introduction. This is just my personal view, but I thought there was a lot more to be said about him and in a way I feel a bit cheated. Although his introduction was good I felt you started to simply state things about him instead of showing. However the fact he seems to develop some affection for Konohamaru though was nice to see. It's an unusual couple in canon for the obvious reasons, but they do sort of click ones to writing them, right?
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  • From bob665 on June 01, 2010
    Chapter 61 personally I like the addition of Tayuya and I think, but cannot be sure I know where you're going with it. Pseudo-children? About the only other thing I can think of to say is that the title for this chapter Control probably wasn't the best because there is very little control throughout. Perhaps Training would have been more appropriate.
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  • From bob665 on June 01, 2010
    Chapter 56 Snuffers an inevitable outcome of the cat situation. I'm more than happy to have my imagination fail me there, but inevitably there is a part of me that only sees a difference in degrees with one crew over the others.
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  • From bob665 on June 01, 2010
    Chapter 55 so far I haven't really enjoyed reading your mature scenes. Most the time they feel tacked on and a bit tedious and I think I've only counted three different positions which makes them a little boring to read. However, in this chapter I felt that the mature content was an outgrowth of the events in the story rather than just being tacked on or a flimsy excuse. Perhaps I'm just misreading something and overall I'm thoroughly enjoying the story.
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  • From bob665 on June 01, 2010
    “He wants to dock his ship to meet with to me,” Sasuke told him.
    A very odd misspelling where you put one word that doesn't need to be there towards the end of the chapter. Not sure if I should bother pointing these things out or not?
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  • From bob665 on May 31, 2010
    Chapter 53 when Naruto was talking about the kids it was cute in a sad way. As for the rest of the chapter well the question again of how old they are comes up. On a personal note I don't understand the temptation with the whole Gaara thing, but I'm weird.
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  • From ANON - the_boyfriend on May 31, 2010
    hi,

    love the 3 some between Haku, Kisame & Itachi. I believe the only conclusion possible between them. Well, let see what happen with Neji. True, it was only a matter of time before the Hyuga manifested themselves. As for Naruto how long before he snap about the nursery. keep up with the good work.

    read you later
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  • From ANON - Nivel on May 31, 2010
    Urgh, that pervert was watching them having sex in his ship? Well, can't blame him, I woulda done the same thing! Possessive Naruto growling....does this mean we get to see him fuck Sasuke in the next chapter? Along with hot sexy descriptions? *puppy eyes* Pretty please?
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  • From meowkuu2 on May 31, 2010
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!! really that's all I have to say...like....OMG....I need more this is so addictive! And now more hyuga??? ( even though neji doesn't acknowledge himself as one).....can't wait for your next updateeeeeee!!!!!!
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  • From Prism0467 on May 31, 2010
    Ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...someone's in trouble...
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2010
    I know you say these recent chaptersare rushed, but they still cacrumpetme across brilliantly anyways so i wouldnt stress out too much about it.
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  • From roro237 on May 30, 2010
    Marvelous! I loved what maded Naruto day Haku tears over the Kimono:) Klennethon Darrent still makes my skin crawl. But what Neji said makes sense he's lonely. He watchs everything and is still lonely, the creep:) I really enjoyed! You covered alot with getting everything ready in their quarters and the dinner. Thank you for the treat this weekend:) Yea Baby!! ^_^
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