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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce

From ANON - mikyu on August 05, 2011
I've started to read this fanfic ... about a week ago. I wanted to review around chapter 20 already when you mentioned that you should invest so much effort into a fanfic ... rather in an original story. however, I realized you actually already started a 3rd story on this XDD I'm glade you continued :)
It's quite rare that somebody is writing a fanfic which is placed in a sci-fi universe ^^ ... I like sci-fi which is why I started reading it :) maybe my opinion is not that good since I don't have much experience in reading sci-fi fics, but I think you describe it rather well. I think your universe is kind of ... realistic? ..if you can call it like that hahaha the only thing which I kind of miss .... is there no uhm .... government like thing? or are the planets so far all kinda self regulated.
Anyway ... the plot is so much different then in the manga XDDD I kinda feel sorry for itachi :// ... sasuke is so ... reasonable in this story hahaha he almost gets annoying in the manga for being so teme XDD
Anyway, I'll continue reading an hope you haven't stopped writing when I reach the 3rd story ... but I'll probably review again before that XDDD
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From GudenMulle on June 17, 2011
As I an re-reading this story, I find myself increasingly annoyed by Naruto. He is wonderful, beautiful and lots of other positive things. But he tends to blaim Sasuke a lot for lots of different things, mostly without thinking about why Sasuke does the things he does. For example, the issue of Shika parenting one of the babies, I blame that solely on Naruto. Naruto has a bad habit of demanding promises from Sasuke, and when Sasuke does it, the only way it is possible, he then clanders Sasuke for it. It was not fair to Shika, though I love the little bundle of constantly-thinking-joy Haru will turn into because of his genes. And Shika taking care of Haru is possibly the cutest thing ever.
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From ANON - Hey on April 12, 2011
I am on chapter 61th at the moment, and i decided to have a break and tell u a bit about ur story.
I sttarted reading it after I saw a fanart made for u, with Shikamaru holding a baby.
It got me curious.
And then i got hooked.
And It's my first review on this website (i usually use Y!gal or ff).
But i wanted to tell u that the story is very oryginal and nicely written.
I had mixed feeling only once, when u introduced the OC and Kabuto, cuz i was scared that it would turn into some forced Angst story.
But it didn't
I love it, that u make the chhaacters simply live, trying to fix problems, interacting with others and changing others.
It's light and entertaining and interesting.
I like Kisame a lot in this story, and i am so happy about what u did with him.
And, really, thank u for writing this story.
It's a one of a kind adventure.
Greetings! =)
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From Dariuchka on March 13, 2011
Hi, I found out your story from Shika/Neji community and this is the first ever sci-fi I have ever read, I think... Certainly the first slash one, so far I like the way you built the entire story: it's very apparent that you put considerable amount of effort and time which is admirable. It's society created with complex culture,rules and even calendars. But Sex Rule №1 just makes me want to howl >_
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on February 27, 2011
I really loved this story. I don't know how or why but it just swallowed me in... I wish it would never end, just as I wish that he original Naruto (manga or even anime)would never end. On the other hand I hope that even when the original series ends, new fan fics will still be written. Thank you for such a wonderful story!
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From ANON - Julie on February 26, 2011
Then there was a small girl in front of him offering him a flower. He took it, thanked her and, after a moment�s hesitation, smiled. She smiled shyly in return, then turned and ran back towards her brothers. Sasuke eyes followed her and met Naruto�s gaze. Their eyes locked, space dark to sky blue, until the small girl reached her target and threw her arms about Naruto�s neck.

I found this passage so poignant and subtle that it brought tears to my eyes. It made me pity anyone who, through lack of experience, is not able to empathize with the overwhelming and heartwrenching emotions that are compressed in that single instance of eye contact between Naruto and Sasuke.

Is it possible that my interpretation is not your intent? But, I doubt that. Too well you illustrate the best of love - to give each other joy. What better in life than the perfect moment when a happy child presents you with a tiny treasure? Only the instant when you realize that the moment was a gift of love from one you cherish - this is the moment that stills your heart.
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on February 24, 2011
GODS! I so love this story!
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on February 23, 2011
I love this story so much! I saw it thousands of times but the summary never attracted my attention. I was so stupid! This is the best fanfic ever!
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From Nescafevh on December 26, 2010
In chapter 46 you have a link to a song from Naruto. Ever since the episode I have loved this song but since I didn't know what it was called I couldn't find it. I thank you for the link, I found it now and have a copy. THANKS!!!!
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From ANON - Kyoko on November 21, 2010
Seriously your story is amazing! Ok maybe it's because I like space stories and Naruto. Nevertheless, I think you did a great job. Your character are rich and you give a lot of details. English is not my native language, however with your explanations I understood almost all of your story. I've read montains of fictions on ffnet and I think it's one my favorite. Sadly I can't really comment on your style because I won't dare with my own english level. I'm looking forward to read 'Tales in Tarrasade' and 'Iterations'. See ya'
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From bloodshound on September 09, 2010
amazing, simply amazing. I wish this was a novel so i could rush out and buy it.
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From asm613 on July 21, 2010
well done. good story written/told. thank you for sharing
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From asm613 on July 21, 2010
�No, I would love to do it. What are you going to do? Train?�
�Training would be good,� Naruto answered.--

why does naruto get away with lying and going behind sasuke's back so much. and making unreasonable demands and getting his way-like claiming shika's and the entire crew's genetic material because he wanted children. sasuke went through a lot of trouble to make naruto's wish come true- made shika swear to not claim the child- then naruto tells shika which is his and asks for foregiveness----i notice he waited until nothing could be done- like maybe a day or 2 after fertilization so shika could have stopped it if he wanted. and sometimes naruto doesn't even say sorry- like when sasuke asked naruto how he could do that- naruto just said that it had to be done-it must be dealt with because he wanted shika to call him na-chan again---even his reason for making it right was selfish- because he wanted his guilt gone.
naruto is not the saint that the crew makes him out to be- he's quite manipulative
that's not a fault with the story or writing- just one reader's observation. i still find the story fascinating.
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From asm613 on July 21, 2010
Klennethon Darrent had given them the original;--

isn't this the man they can not trust. the man the secretly recorded them having sex and all other times they were in their room. how can he know it's the original. plus they didn't have it scanned for bugs or tracers or other recording/transmitting devices or explosives, etc....he had the chance to detain kabuto for sasuke and did not- had the nerve to tell them he saw him- the man that stole his brother and his mate's genetic material, etc..don't understand how naruto did not shred him.

this was a nice domestic chapter. loved the itachi/sasuke hug.
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From asm613 on July 21, 2010
(Gaara discovered that laughing was infectious. He knew that he would pass out. His last thought was that he needed more experience of laughing.)-______you are doing great things with gaara's character- this was cute and funny and sweet.
You had written that kiba wasn't used to winning arguments with adults- but when you wrote about the holo-vids containing kiba and gaara- you wrote that kiba was older than gaara. kiba's argument was with gaara- he's older than gaara- so why didn't he think he could win. the littermates thing between them- doesn't that mean a group of species born at the same time by the same mother or set of incubators. kiba and gaara are different species and were not born at the same time- they were playmates for a while- so why can't gaara consider kiba for a mate. just wondering.

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