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Savin' Me {Akatsuki Love Story} Part I	By : FanfictionWriter Category: Naruto > General Views: 1038 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Chapter List
- 1-Savin' Me {Akatsuki Love Story} Part I
- 2-Chapter Two - Revelation
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Ching! The kunai knives collided in the air. I can beat you, I know it! Thought a black-haired girl over and over again. She was fighting against her master yet again, for the right to join the organization. Her before-tests she had passed with flying colors, greater than her Shukun in all areas, but strength. That's what she needed to win, not saying she wasn't powerful, because she was even more powerful than her Master's partner, whom never stepped foot on their battlefield in fear of being hurt, or worse slain. She fought gallantly, in more ways than just one, but maybe she couldn't win. Just maybe, Master is too strong.. She thought, her gorgeous brown eyes glistened under the light of the sun.
The chains on her baggy pants rattled as she ran backwards to get out the way of an oncoming kunai. She began to think about her old sensei, whom was never called her 'Master', but was respected more than the Leader of the organization, at least, to her. ~Now, Cherish, just because you think you're weak, doesn't mean you are, you're not, I would know best, after all, you still haven't released my true power yet.~ That demon wolf, she speaks to me yet again, right in the middle of a skirmish. Not now, I'm busy, wolf.The little teenager thought, in hopes that her thoughts could reach the black wolf. The black wolf is, indeed, a Jinchuuriki, but the organization can't find out about that, or she'll die during the extraction process. No one can take the tailed-beasts out of one person's body without death as one's only option. She shivered under her black shirt at the thought of dying now, it's too early, her vows could not be completed if she was dead. She got her mind back to the fight as she remembered that this was her fifth fight with her Master, she has to win.
If she doesn't, she'll never be as high a rank as her Master, whom she looks up to, and wants to be just like. Her only dreams will be crushed if she didn't win. Unfortunately, her body has had enough, one more hit could mean losing, which, in her eyes, would be worse than dying. With the last of her strength, she was able to land another punch on her Masters' face, and another kick to his stomach. He coughed up some more blood, but wiped it away like it was nothing, like he liked the taste of blood in his mouth. But she was a different story, blood was coming out from behind her leaf headband, out of her mouth, and even from huge gashes in her arms and tore up pants. She couldn't take the pain any more, she could barely move now. She had to hold back puking from the taste of even her own blood.
I'll beat him, just you wait and see, tenmaookami! She thought, with a feeling of extreme beatitude, she may make it into the organization. ~Yes, we will see.~ The wolf had a susceptibility for speaking in properly formed sentences, never using slang words, such as 'yeah'.
Cherish had but one chance, one chance, to finally beat her Tatsujin. But she couldn't, her first step and she nearly fell forward. Ignoring the severity of her pain, she finally ran at him, reaching behind her back she did a few hand-signs and the Chidori finally appeared in her hands.
The rapid movement of her hands over the Chidori -which was black as in terms of her chakra, and the wolf- kept the Chidori powerful, only bringing her hands forward when she was arms length away from her Master. Unfortunately, that was a waste of her already extremely low chakra levels, he grabbed her hand and pushed the Chidori into a tree. As the goth teenager turned around, her Master grabbed her throat and threw her at the ground, letting her throat be released in the process. She panted a few more times on her back, looking up at her Master, before everything whited out on her.
"Cherish, stop writing in your journal, it's time to eat your first meal in Akatsuki!" I heard my Master call me. I was sitting up in my room, writing in my journal about earlier today. Happily, I put my journal in the oak table beside my bed. I grabbed my headband and put it on my forehead, the slash through it, breaking the alliance to my village and my friends, was seen visibly through a few loose black strands of hair and, oddly, made me even happier. I grabbed my Akatsuki cloak and put it on, overtop of my regular clothes and walked out of my room. It was a very bland room, not really filled with much, just an oak dresser with a mirror, my bed with black sheets and a white pillow with a black pillow case, hard-wood oak flooring and the beside table I had. All my under wire and a few clothes were inside of my four-drawer dresser.
I walked down a short corridor, passed a bathroom, and into a kitchen, where I saw my comrades eating a wide variety of food. Being the vegetarian I am, I sat next to my Master, Itachi Uchiha, and right infront of the salad bowl. I looked around the table and on the right side of me, there was Kisame, the sharkman, Itachi's partner. His Samehada still on his back, sometimes I wondered how he carried that thing. The rectangular wooden table had Leader-sama at the very end, with Deidara-san next him. Next to Deidara was his partner, Sasori, and next to him was Zetsu. Deidara and Sasori, on the outside of their cloaks, looked partially normal, but under Sasori's cloak, he was actually a puppet, and Deidara had mouths on either one of his hands. Other than that, Deidara had teal eyes, one of which under a scope and his blonde hair, which was a half ponytail. And Sasori he had short red hair and black eyes. Zetsu looked anything but normal. He had a Venus Flytrap over his head, I had no idea whether it was detachable. Anyway, half of him was black and the other half was white, it reminded me of yin and yang, but whether that was the case or not, I really didn't know. Itachi-san didn't tell me much about Zetsu-san. Then beside Zetsu there were a few empty chairs, but I hadn't put much thought into that, I was too busy trying to ignore the feeling that I was being stared at. I looked up from my salad at the other members and saw every eye on me except for Kisame and Itachi, who were still eating.
"What?" I asked, raising one eyebrow, "It's not like there was never a girl in Akatsuki before." As I began to finish my sentence, Itachi-san leaned in and whispered something in my ear. "You haven't?" I asked, sort of surprised. I shrugged my shoulders, and looked back down at my salad, beginning to eat. I felt eyes on the top of my head. "Do you mind?!" I asked, yelling as I looked up. "I prefer to eat in peace!" I yelled, pissed off that they wouldn't stop staring at me. Itachi-san used his hands to cover my mouth and bring me closer to him. He leaned down and whispered in my ear, "I don't think you should yell at them, if they decide to gang up on you for yelling at them, you'll never have a chance. Watch your tone..". I huffed, crossing my arms over my chest. "Itachi-san, when do you think you'll be painting my nails?" I asked him in a quiet voice so no one could hear me. Unfortunately, that didn't go too well.
"I'll do it, hm!" Deidara yelled, raising his hand enthusiastically. I couldn't help but slightly laugh at Deidara-san's enthusiasm; and hyper attitude. I finished a light bowl of salad and walked towards the living room. "I'll be in the living room whenever you're ready Deidara-san." I said, unemotionally and without stopping. I plopped myself down on the couch, which was red and had about five cushions on it. I was seated right in the middle of two cushions on either side of me. I sat there, waiting patiently in front of the blank television screen.
I just stared ahead, seeing my own reflection. A gothic girl, nothing to live for, at least, not anymore... I used to live only for my little brother, until that one day where fate just took him away from me.
I was there, I did absolutely nothing, frozen in fear, I watched helplessly. My brother's unfortunate death unfolded in front of my very eyes as I was cowardly shivering in fear. He died at the age of five. I was only eight years old at the time of his death. I was spared my life because of the demon wolf, tenmaookami. "Are you ready?" Deidara walked in the room and smiled at me, holding purple nail polish.
"Deidara-san... Do you mind if we did this in my room, instead?" I asked, I felt like I need to tell someone about everything I've been holding back from the world. "Of course not, yeah... Let's go." He smiled an even wider smile. I couldn't help but smile back at him.
We walked through the kitchen and to my bedroom, getting stares from the other members and glares from Itachi. Grabbing the golden knob, I opened my bedroom door and walked in.
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This is a picture of the main character, Cherish, a name given to me by my friend. BUT, Cherish has black hair!
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i141/Yaoi_And_Anime_Lover/Anime%20Girls/f1a780da.jpg
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Savin' Me {Akatsuki Love Story} Part I