A Fine Line Between Us | By : eksimenrol Category: Naruto > Het - Male/Female > Naruto/Sakura Views: 4636 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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Quick notes: All is cannon until 311.
Chapter Five:
Cute Thoughts
It wasn’t
until we were seated and our food had arrived that I noticed something. “Hey, where’s Shikamaru?”
It was
Chouji that responded to me “His dad wanted help to get some horns for
medicine, so he left.”
“That’s
odd; he’s usually quite good at showing up for mission meetings.” Ino seemed to be staring at Sai the whole
time we’d been here. Chouji seemed
indifferent to the newcomers and called dibs on Shikamaru’s share of the
food. “Wait Chouji, we should introduce
ourselves to Sai first.” Wow, piggie must have a soft spot for Sai.
Everything
was going perfectly fine, then Chouji introduced himself and Sai
hesitated. He wouldn’t, would he? No, Sai is far too intelligent than to insult
Chouji, I mean he’s seen the man fight, he should know better. “Um it’s nice to meet you too, uh-” Oh no, this is not
good; he’s going to say it. He is going
to call Chouji fat! He’s screwed; I
should call for the stretcher now. Then
Naruto saved his ass. The blonde
actually jumped across the table, nearly putting his hand on the hot grill,
clamped his hand across his mouth and told him how he fucked up. Why can’t I keep my eyes off him?
“Was he
trying to say something just now?” Crap Chouji heard him; I got to save
Naruto before something happens to him.
“Ah, no, I
don’t think he was. I didn’t hear him
say something.” Buy it, please buy
it! Oh great it’s Ino’s turn to hit on
Sai. I wonder what he’ll say about
her. Heh, knowing Sai he’ll call her an
ugly pig or something equally true.
“Nice to
meet you, um, Ms. Beautiful.” What! Oh no, oh hell
no! This isn’t right, no this can’t
be. Ino, beautiful? Let me at him. I’m going kill
him!
Naruto
seemed to be paying attention, because he spoke up. “Sakura, can I speak with you for a moment
over here?” As he dragged me off to who
knows where I could only think of one thing.
Ripping Sai limb from limb slowly and painfully. “Sakura, you have to calm down, he doesn’t know
what he’s talking about-”
“Why the hell is it beautiful with Ino?” I can’t
even say the two words in the same sentence without wanting to hit
something. “I mean, I’m much, much
better looking than Ino ever will be, aren’t I?
Of course I am I’m beautiful.
Aren’t I?”
Naruto
carefully took hold of my shoulders and looked deep into my eyes. “Sakura, you are the most beautiful woman
that I know, and no one else even comes remotely close.” He thinks I’m beautiful? He thinks that no one else is more beautiful
than me? What can I say to that?
Suddenly he
pushed me towards the dark corner of the restaurant entrance. What the hell is he doing? Oh no, he thinks that because he called me
beautiful, he can make a move on me? No
way, it’s not going to happen. I let him
have it, again I vented my frustrations, all my pent up worries of not being
beautiful enough. “SHANNARO!”
That’s when
I noticed the waitress behind him shaking in fear. “Um miss, you didn’t need to hit him. It was my fault, I bumped into him and he
pushed you. I’m really sorry. Please forgive me.” She couldn’t even look me in the eye. Am I really that scary?
“It’s
alright; I’ll take him to the hospital.”
Fat chance, they see this they’re going to want to talk to the Hokage,
and she’ll want to know what he did to set me off. I tell her the truth and Shizune will but
scraping my ass off the wall for weeks. “Just give me a moment to say goodbye to my
friends, and I’ll pick him up.”
Everyone
seemed to buy the excuse that Naruto tripped over something and needed to go to
the hospital. Well everyone but Ino that
is. She gave me this look, almost like
she was up to something. Whatever that
look was, I ignored it and left to pick up Naruto.
It wasn’t
hard to figure out where to take him, his place was across town and mine was on
the way to the hospital. I managed to
get him settled on the couch, face down, when I noticed the jagged shards of
glass jutting out of his back. Why do I
keep hurting him when he doesn’t deserve it?
You know,
looking at him, he doesn’t seem like such an idiot, well when he keeps his
mouth shut. He’d almost be cute if he
weren’t Naruto. What am I thinking? I’m loosing my mind; I want him to forgive me
so bad I’m starting to think he’s cute. Okay, I’m going to stop thinking about
him. I’m just going to heal him up and
send him home.
Ok Sakura.
Focus on the problem, he has a lot of glass sticking out of his back, we need
to take them out now. Okay I’m going to
need something to put the glass in and something to take it out of him
with. Those tweezers and that empty bowl
will do. Okay time to fix this boy
up. Seems he got lucky, there’s a lot of
glass, but I don’t see many small shards.
But some of these are deep; I’m going to need to put something on it to
prevent infection. Well I better get to
work.
It took me
the better part of an hour to remove all of the glass shards, and when the
final shard was removed I let out a satisfied sigh. The hard part is over, now I just need to use
the antiseptic ointment from my field kit and we’re done. I left that in my room, didn’t I? As I made my way from my bedroom I heard a
yelp from my couch.
“Naruto,
you shouldn’t be moving after the landing you had.” I let out a quick sigh. If he doesn’t move I can have this finished
in ten minutes. “You need to stay off
your back. You uh, sort of landed on a
glass vase, and I spent the last 20 minutes pulling shards of glass out of your
back. Lie on your stomach, and take off
your shirt. Let me look at your back,
make sure you don’t get an infection or something.” He’s not going to do it. Okay time to get serious, I’ll give him the do-as-I-say-now-or-you’ll-learn-the-meaning-of-pain
look.
“It’s okay
Sakura, my back doesn’t really hurt that much.” It’s not working, he’s trying to wave me off,
and I’m not going to stand for this.
Honestly, who does he think he’s dealing with? Oh great he’s trying to get up, now I’m going
to have to force him down. Or not, looks
like he can’t get up.
“That’s better
Naruto.” Now all that’s left is to get
that ointment on. I carefully applied it
to each of the wounds in his back after removing his shirt. “How are you feeling? Any better?”
“Just a
headache, and I was a bit dizzy earlier, but I’m fine-”
“You
probably have a concussion. I’m really
sorry about before Naruto, I shouldn’t have hit you like that, it wasn’t your fault.
After you pushed me into that corner and I hit you the waitress that
bumped into you tried to apologize for what she had done, but it was too
late.” How long have I been rubbing his
back? I swear I finished with the
ointment ten minutes ago. For ten
minutes all I’ve been doing is rubbing his toned back. What the hell am I thinking? Okay, time to stop before I do something I’ll
regret.
“It’s okay
Sakura; my back is feeling a lot better.
And I accept your apology, so don’t worry about it, I forgive you.” He gave me a smile and tried to get up once
again. What is this man doing, he’s
going to hurt himself if he does that.
“Stop
trying to get up, you’ll only make it worse.
Now stay right there Naruto, I’ll be back in just a minute, I need to go
get something. And I don’t want you to
move one inch. You’re hurt and you could
make it worse. Tell you what, if you’re
good, we’ll even go out for ramen.” Wow,
I must really feel sorry for him, I offered to get ramen with him.
“Okay
Sakura, I won’t move an inch. I
promise!” Same old Naruto, every time
he’s happy he grins like a fool. I can’t
help but chuckle at how cute and childish he is. Great I’m doing it again, calling him
cute. What the hell is wrong with me
today?
“Just
relax, I’ll be right back.” I quickly
left the room with all my equipment. I’m
going to need to clean and sterilize this stuff. Screw it I’m too tired to do it right now,
I’ll do it after I get Naruto out of the house.
I entered
my small living room to find the loud blonde asleep on my couch. He looks so peaceful, so innocent laying
there. Peaceful and
innocent and not at all cute.
Nope, he’s not even close to cute, with the messy hair and small bubbles
of drool in the corner of his mouth. Oh
who the hell am I kidding? In the
smallest, tiniest tiniest way I find Naruto
cute. But I don’t know why. Maybe if I stare at him I’ll see all his faults
and stop thinking that he’s cute. Taking
that thought to heart I climbed atop him to get a closer view.
Okay, this
is completely insane. I’ve spent the last hour staring at his unconscious
body. And still I find him cute. One hour and I’m
nowhere near figuring out why. I don’t
have feelings for him do I? I mean, I
care about him sure. I enjoy his
company. But do I really want to be with him? Great, I’m not even sure if I don’t
anymore. Maybe I do want to be with
Naruto, maybe all my fixation on Sasuke was just a fling or crush. I need to talk to someone about this. I know I’ll go see Ino, she was a help
before, maybe she can give me some advice on getting over this, what ever it
is. Well if I’m going to see Ino, I’m
going to have to get rid of Naruto first.
I let out a small sigh; he can be so troublesome sometimes.
I leaned
over Naruto. “Naruto?” It was only a whisper, but he woke with a
start. He jumped at me, well I did
startle him, I guess he was having a very peaceful sleep, and my whisper woke
him. Oh no, he’s coming at me. Oh great, he’s going to hit me. But it’s not his fault, so I’m not going to
hit him. Well I will hit him because
there’s no way to stop him from coming at me like that, but I won’t blame him,
at least not entirely. I started this by
shocking him, so I’m going to take my lumps and apologize to him. Well if it’s going to happen I might as well
prepare myself. I winced prior to out
collision.
Great, he’s
scared. I can feel his sudden breaths
against my face. I can even smell
him. There’s a slight musk about him,
like he’s constantly working out, and a hint of noodle broth. Must be training and ramen. It’s not that bad though, and entirely
Naruto.
It’s kind
of odd how this is taking so long, we were only inches apart when I woke him,
how long does it take for two people to crash into each other? I might as well just close my eyes and wait
it out.
That’s when
it happened. The
moment when his face met mine, the moment when I opened my eyes. The moment when he kissed
me. I should be angry, hell
pissed that he would do such a thing. I
should be beating him upside the head so many times that when he leaves his
coma he’ll have headaches. I should be
rationalizing that he didn’t mean to.
But I’m too shocked to find out that it doesn’t feel horribly wrong to
have his lips on mine. What does that mean?
So there we
sat, we did nothing but sit and stare at each other. He’s scared of me, trying to think of what he
can say to get out of being hurt. I’ve
hit him far too many times for him to think otherwise. I have to take responsibility for my
mistakes. I have to make it up to him. I have to apologize. I have to say it. Three small words, tree
words with a much grander meaning then what they are. Here it goes.
“I-” Don’t
stop now. “I’m sorry.” It was sincere, it was honest. It was the pure truth in verbal form, no lie
or deceit at all. “I’m sorry about that
Naruto; I didn’t mean to bump into you like that.” Why would apologizing leave me with this
blush? I know I’m not embarrassed, so
why?
Then he
spoke, and it made it easier for me to deal with the guilt. “Ah, it’s okay Sakura. It’s my fault too.” He ending up letting out a small chuckle, but
it was only to cover his nervousness.. “I guess I shouldn’t have reacted like that
when you startled me, huh?” Again, he
chuckled nervously, why would he be so nervous?
Then it hit me, I was still hovering over him. Maybe that’s why I’m blushing so much.
So that’s
why I finally got off of him, retreating to the far side of the couch. Somehow the farther away from him I got, the
worse my blushing seemed to grow. I
can’t even look at him. I quickly turned
my back to him. What the hell is wrong
with me? I’m yammering like a schoolgirl. “Um Naruto? Do you think, err, that is are you feeling
better?” I can’t even keep my hands from
fidgeting.
“Huh? Oh
yeah, a lot better thanks.” He sounded
happy, I’m glad he does, because I don’t know what I’m feeling.
“Oh good,
um then would you mind leaving please? I
just have a lot to do and it’s already kinda late, and a, um, well yeah.”
He barely
even hesitated, so much like Naruto; he’d do anything for me. “Sure thing Sakura. I should probably be getting home
anyway.” Without moving I could hear him
head for the door and trip while putting on his sandals. “Um Sakura, I was wondering if you’d help me
with some training tomorrow.”
“Huh? Oh tomorrow? I’m sorry; I have a shift at the
hospital. The Hokage wants me to look
after Kakashi before he gets released.”
“Okay
then. Well I’ll see you around then.” He
opened my door, and still I hadn’t turned to say goodbye.
“Naruto,
wait!” I ran to my door and saw him a
few feet from the entrance. I’m not sure
why I’m going to do this, maybe to make amends, maybe because I want to. Maybe it won’t hurt to go on one date with him. I might even be able to teach him something
about women. “I should be off around six
tomorrow, if you want to get dinner or something.” I did it, I asked Naruto out. And I’m not even really embarrassed to say
that I did. And still I have a blush
that just won’t go away!
“Sure thing! I’ll
meet you at the hospital at six.” He
didn’t jump for joy, he didn’t run at me and try and hug me. He smiled, looked my in the eye and then
left.
Long after
he had left I still stood there. “I’m
not sure why you’re acting so mature Naruto, but I’m looking forward to
tomorrow night.”
Author notes: All
right all right! I am almost caught
up. I will be after the next chapter,
where Sakura goes to Ino for advice. Now
for some news. I was trying to have this
chapter done last night. However a computer
error caused my system to crash and I would have had to reboot, which at 3 am
was not going to be fun. So I decided to
call it a night and work on it today.
The good news is that I only lost 3 lines, and they didn’t sound good so
I never rewrote them. I’ve had people
ask for longer chapters, this one is by far the longest I have ever written, it comes close to 5 pages.
I’ve also have people question as to how I can update so quickly. This being the 3rd update in a
week. Well is quite simple. I’ve been cheating for the last 2
chapters. Basically I copy and paste the
corresponding chapter from A Fine Fine Line and
rewrite all but the dialogue. Therefore,
most of the new stuff is just reactions to what is said and done. I’ve also been cheating in the fact that at
the time of writing these moments in A Fine Fine
Line, I thought of what Sakura’s thoughts and actions for each moment were and
then wrote in response to that.
Response to Reviews:
RichardtheDragon: Yeah, I was kinda working half ass on those,
but this one makes up for it I hope.
Naruto-sama: Yeah that chapter was written in like 2 hours
straight. I was on a roll on that
one. And while not in school, I now am
starting a second job, but I’ll always have my evening free to write in, so I shouldn’t
fall to far behind.
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