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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey Great chapter but I hope u can start with a new chapter soon. I like the dream and hope to hear from you I wonder what is going to happen in your other story A Fine Fine Line... Hope you get a new update for both stories up soon thanx and love your stories
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww, cutest chapter ever I bet this story is going to get deeper at some point
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying Sakura's point of view. By slitting A Fine Fine Line and A Fine Line Between Us into two perspectives, you are showing what they are both thinking, without making it really confusing or long. I love this story, it is very romantic and touching, in an awkward sort of way. I would love to see what comes next from both points of view.
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters i gotta say your a very good writer. i hope to read the next chapter soon, also both of your stories are very great i am not sure if i reviewed the other story but i will say they are both great :)
word of advice: keep doing what your doing!
word of advice: keep doing what your doing!
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey even though this is almost word for word the diolog from shippuden 54. it's like im watching the episode all over again. i like how you caught on to ino fallig head over heals for sai. i have been trying to find a fic with this pairing but no luck. if at all posible would you be interested in a chalenge or even a colaboration. i have really been into the whole non-cannon pairings and right now i have really been bent on trying to find new good stories of naruto/sakura. but if you are interseted hit me up my e-mail is on my profile.
MPlantz
MPlantz
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter i must say :)
i can't wait to read the next one, and i like the new chapter to your other stories.
i can't wait to read the next one, and i like the new chapter to your other stories.
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not so good at reviewing, but I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying this fic... More Please!! :)
I can't wait to see Sakura nursing Naruto! ^_^
I can't wait to see Sakura nursing Naruto! ^_^
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting and very profound chapters in both stories, great job
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it didn't freak me out, hell, my nightmares make that one seem like a sweet dream. I was just saying that disclaimers like that should be at the top of the page, that's all.
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm, not bad. i like it. but could you do more naruto sakura fluff? i love the couple! thanks!