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I just came here to scream in terror at the thought of going 10 years without sex. AIEEEEE!

That was a good start, I enjoy the dynamic between Naruto and Sasuke. I hope to see more of this. :) Thanks for the work you've put into it :)

With the reference to something life-changing happening after "dancing madly to Gangnam Style" in the fic's summary, I almost didn't click on the story because I thought you were trolling us. I was surprised to find out that the fic is actually serious, sad, and very cute. Maybe you might want to consider rewriting the summary? I don't think it's quite representative of the tone of the fic.

I like Sasuke and Naruto very much in this. I like this Naruto who is responsible and parental, but who is also believable as an 18 year-old. He's in a good position to be Sasuke's caregiver because he already knows him very well. But there will also be challenges since caring for a child full-time and being responsible for all the serious parenting decisions is a really different thing to just coming in for a few hours a night as Sasuke's babysitter. No more crazy poker nights where he gets his nipple pierced for Naruto!

And a question for you: for those of us a little leery about shouta, how shouta will this story be? Will Sasuke still be in elementary school when the attraction happens, or will he be older? (13+ ?)

Interesting start^^Can't wait for more!!! See you again soon!!!