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for Another Perfect Wonder

by jaded_priceless

schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved the dream and Kakashi's mindset!
person KC
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! A new chapter! I had almost forgotten about this story. Please don't take that as a criticism for not posting, I have been reading more stories in the "Originals" section on this site. I am always happy to read what others post here as I can not even commit my story ideas to paper, let alone post them on any site.

I would not have thought about Shisui Uchiha as being a past love interest for Iruka, now I will have to go and look him up on the Naruto wiki and learn more about him.

If the saying is three steps forward and two steps back... poor Iruka and Kakashi seem to take the two steps forward and three steps back approach in their developing relationship. I am still holding out for a "happy couple" ending for the two of them, but some of the best stories I have read have taken a while to get to that point.
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loving it and cannot wait for the next chapter! And I must say that I thoroughly enjoy your sense of humor! If I can figure out how to add this to a favorites list, it's so going on there!! ~Sephoriya
schedule July 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It does! ^_^
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Too short!
The beginning was confusing since they way you ended the one before it sounded like Iruka fell over the chasm.
person silistina
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story plz plz plz continue....I really can't wait to read more.
schedule June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was sooo exited when I saw the update to your story after my own long hiatus from the internet. I love the way the story is going and can't wait for the next update. Thank you so much for your post.
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love the line about the menstrual cycle! But poor Iruka.
schedule May 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Too short! I read that one quick. Can't wait until the next one. ^_^
person kc
schedule May 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! You posted a new chapter. I hope your life is going well and you are just having difficulties getting this story onto "paper". I enjoyed the chapter and will be semi-patient about waiting for the next chapter. You made my day as none of my watched for favorites have posted anything new in several days... I was starting to have withdrawal symptoms.

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