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for Another Perfect Wonder

by jaded_priceless

schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Multi-chapter update is a wonderful Christmas present, thank you! Only thing is, I was confused when I went to the last chapters and was lost. I never remember which chapter I'm on, just that it's the lastest. I loved that Rin basicly raping Kakashi thing!
person kc
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Was so excited to see there was 5 new chapters to read when I checked in today. I am glad to see Iruka and Kakashi are doing okay and not rushing into sex. I wonder what Ryuu-sama is really up to? Is she going to be a distant relative of Iruka's mom? I can hardly wait to find out what she is doing.
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! We're getting to some sexual content! I'm such a pervert. I love your style by the way.
person Skyrere
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe... oh my shit. Chapter 7 had me laughing my ass off...
You have a rare talent and a great skill in wordsmithing.
You give a depth to Iruka that I would not have imagined for myself.
Wonderful job.
person Skyrere
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just signed up for this site. How does one add a story to favorites? How does one add an author to favorites?
I want updates for this story.
schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*blush* You're welcome. I really do love this story and like I said, you're posting faster than me. And I have a dark side (see my published works), so I really like this story and poor Kakashi. I hope he finds solace in Iruka, he deserves it. And that part about Kushnia was great. Gave me a warm fuzzy. ^_^
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Poor Kakashi. That was well written, but it suprises me that Kakashi started ab libing like that and then got into his own memories of the rape, but well done, well done.
And paitence? You're updaing faster than any other story I'm reading and your updating MUCH faster than I am on my stories. ^_^
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't expecting an update until after Thanksgiving! Yay! Can't wait until the next installment!
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Her!" I love it! I cannot wait for Kakashi to fully wake up! This will be good.
person criss_cross
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is so well written, so elaborate and consistent. I love it and every chapter is a confirmation of your talent. Such well written characters, a great plot and the details... Well, thank you for the story and for the fact that you are still writing it. So many good (or great) stories are abandoned!!!

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