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Oh my god. There are so many things, I don't even know where to begin. But this last chapter.. If it hadn't been in the middle of the night, I would probably have done some kind of victory-dance. It was like GOD DAMN YES, FINALLY!!!! I have to tell you, it was goddamn daunting to start reading this story. It started out so extremely gruesome, and there were so many chapters and they were all so long, and it felt like I really had to read and pay attention to every detail given, I couldn't just skim through and get the gist of things. That's pretty damn demanding of a person :P . But I have to say that I'm in love. I will DEFINITELY be checking in again when you update. Though you broke my heart when Asuma died. And I must admit I'm just waiting, dancing around on my toes for Kakashi and Iruka to show up!! I don't really have enough time and room to comment on all the things I want to say, but let's just suffice to say that I'm pretty damn satisfied with how you are treating the characters. (I apologize for the excessive use of the exclamation-mark, I guess I was excited)

loved this chapter. but you just wetted the yaoi monsters appetite. and the whole women are week thing just pissed me off. but i do realize who grew up with, and that monster saw women as lower beings. if we were week, we wouildnt give birth.

other then that i loved the whole police station part. i just about died of laughter when the officer was freaking out over naruto acting like a animal. priceless. then the yaoi monster was awakend wtih the whole master thing. and in all honesty it will be entresting to see who will top. as sasuke said neither will give in easly. but it is possible to top from the bottom. and sasuke thinks naruto beautiful, i so happy. when naruto went into that whore house, i was just about ready to jump into the story and pull the puta hair out when she called him ugly.
and on a seperate note, thankyou for staying fairly regular with the updates, and character development. some stories i have read are realy long but are dealing with the same issues that were addressed in the beggining. with this story you brought out all the diffrent complexities of the inner selves that makes this story believeable. even when i get mad at the charactes i still want to understand them. and i also thankyou for keeping the characters personalities of the original story.

Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god!!!!! Haku is gonna catch em! LOL. Thanks for updating. I was happy to see the fireworks/kiss scene from Sasukes POV. And I was happy to see that they both were interested in keeping the night progressing. I was afraid you had screwed them over by getting them arrested. Then I was a afraid you had screwed them over by getting them released and maybe the impulse had died. Oh by the way...I loved the wild animal act put on by Naruto in the jail cell. LOL. The ending of this chapter was mega hot. I'd love to know what was going through Naruto's mind also. The smex was soooo yummy and just perfect. After what happened to Naruto in the dungeons, I don't think there's anyway he'll be able to be the bottom, and Sasuke is just too new at the entire activity to be able expect that kind of action. I look forward to more.

No, I've still been here, hiding in places to read on my cell at work... I still feel that the story is pure awesomeness!!! :nosebleed:

-Is rolling around merrily with a shit-eating grin on her face- Finalllllllllyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!! Sooooooo Happpppppyyyy!!!!

You nearly gave me a heart attack when the fic started off with rejection!!! I was like, 'Nooooooo!! Naruto!! How did you F**K It up THIS time!?!?!?!' But then You cleared that bit up and I was like, " Ahhh, I see what you did there, you sneaky little fanfiction writer, you!' And the Effin wannabe gangstas almost ruined it!! When they came out I was like. 'Nooooooo!! You're keeping from my ManSex! DAMN YOU!!!!' Lol but then the cell play made up for it cuz Sasuke got to play Naruto's master x) That was pretty cute, and kinky, so I liked it lots. I was almost afraid they were gonna say 'F' it, today's been too long a day, I'm going to bed, I can't deal with this right now.' but they didn't and their time together was so hot! And it ended with cuddles!! -squeal- I wonder what Naruto was gonna ask D: Maybe something along the lines of "Can we do this again, tomorrow?" Lol that'd be great. I can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out! -tackle glomps you- XOXOXs Kei-Chan~!

You're very welcome! Eh, it wasn't boring or anything at all; I think you did a very nice job in making it all flow and work together. And yes, Kisame rocks my socks and I look forward to seeing more of him

I enjoyed the opening with Naruto recalling the past few days with Temari's arrival and how Shika has been, a nice way to sum it all up without hitting a lull! lol. And then his "embarrassing" confession XD Oh, all this building UST and attraction is killing me - but in such a good way.

And Jiraiya!!! I hope we'll be seeing more of him (and yay Sasuke for tagging along). I love that Sasuke knows about Naruto's father, and that there seems to be more understanding now. And the end of the chapter? Hells yes. That was so Naruto-like to tease him more. Hehehe :)

Every chapter seems to get better than the last and I can't wait to see where the next one leads us in this pretty amazing tale.

-Deni

you are evil, like the fruits of devil,evil. i am so glad that i did not read this infront of my family. i would have died. so are they going to finaly get down to business,or must i imagine myself throtleing you. i would also like to see naruto get jealouse and realize it. have some person(male/ female) from sasuke past hit on him. and i still wish for haku to find someone new. and are you going to bring hinata back. you have killed off most of the main female characters.

Salutations! I'm so happy to be back x)

You truly are a cruel misstress indeed!! You finally, fiiiiiinally get them to that point ... and BAM. End of the chapter, with sweet promises in the next that we will be forced to wait for, while we sit at our computer screens, faces flushed, hearts racing, jaws slacked, and left wanting!! and it was only a few lines! I can't imagine what reaction a few paragraphs will get!!

Lol but my raging hormones aside, this chapter was awesome! And I'm so so so happy I get to tell you that! -cuddles the review button- I bookmark the current chapter of Sin every time you update and then check back everyday (sometimes twice, i'll peek in around the evening time) to see if another chapter has been added. Your updates make me so happy I could float~ I loved Jiraiya, he is just fool of awesome, and omg that feast made me so hungry! I'm jealous. I want to partake too!! -Slight backtracking- I almost wanted to throttle Naruto for telling Sasuke to get off (and not in the fun way!) him in the gym, but bless Sasuke's soul for knowing and demanding what he wants! I am sooooooo looking forward to the next chapter, but totally prepared for it to not take off exactly where you ended it x) You're good for keeping us guessing as to where we'll be and what will be going on at the beginning of a chapter. Tis awesome, and i wouldn't change it for the world! You rock my sock! XOXOXs ~Kei-Chan

Okay....after wiping the drool off my chin. I do a little happy dance! Why is it that even the smallest hint of these two getting together is enough to make me shiver and stare glassy-eyed at the screen, then scroll back up and read that very tantalizing preview of what is to come a few more times???? Thank you sooo very much for this update. As much as I've loved this story. I love it even more today. You pinned Jiraiya perfectly. I love the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke as they suffer through this sexual angst. There is too much to love here and I look forward to even more.

Loved It. Going on my recommended list! Please write more~