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This story is truly captivating, it's the best fanfic I've ever read. Every word, sentence, paragraph and chapter, is brilliantly written, and it's quite clear that you know what you want with the story. I simply love how your plot is unfolding, and the way you portray the characters, it's all just genius. I found this story about half a month ago, when we didn't have internet at home, and read the first 31 chapters on my phone because I couldn't wait for the internet to come back. Would've left a review half a month ago, but my stupid phone wouldn't allow me to. Keep up the great work!

-Sizone

Hey I just PM you at ff I couldn't fine your story over there and I could fine it here at first:) I was missing you and wanted to re read some chapter. I'm so glad you're here:) I don't want to lose sight of you and your story:) So I'm good now ^_^

haku is alive. thankyou kiyasama. he is a fighter. sad about sai though. i am now majorly wishing for haku happiness. oh and one more thing, if i dont review for a while it just means i cant find your story. thats all.

That was brilliant. I was so hoping that they could convert Sai, but i guess not =( I toooootally didn't see that fight outcome tho! Kudos to you for coming up with something so inventive! I love Sasuke and Naruto best when they are together, -sigh- they make me happy =) I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!

OH! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!!! Thank you for not killing Haku. Again, it was another awesome chapter and I look forward to the next. I was afraid we might have had to wait a little longer for that update, but you never cease to amaze with how regularly you update. For that I really thank you. I don't have much more to comment on. This story is so well written that sometimes, I just need to let you know I enjoyed the latest chapter and will be waiting patiently to see what happens next.

Holy Crap!!!! Yes I'm upset that you've left us all on one hell of a cliff, but I forgive you because you put our boys back together. Please don't let anything terrible happen to Haku. I hope he's able to take care of himself, but I understand that this story has to get worse before it can get better. I'm sure this nips any hanky panky in the bud when the guys get home to discover Haku isn't there. Oh well. at least there's a bigger chance of them getting to the real stuff before Naruto leaves. Thanks again for updating. I love, love, love this story!

I am in a happy tingly place n.n Naru and Sasu, you boys make me so happy. This chapter was adorable, from Haku's date, to the swing set, and they freakin crazy cool telepathy that led to that kiss! Loved it loved loved it! There's no way only 3 people are still reading this fic! I'm reading it!! I just missed reviewing the last chapter for some reason... i might have read it on my phone... I hope they can convert Sai, that would be amazing and a lovely smack to Orochimaru's face. >D

nonononono haku cant be hurt or dead. if he is dead i may come after you with a shotgun. and my coment about karin was just a obbservation. she likes sasuke and sergei, two emotionaly stunted men.
i totaly forgot how feminine haku looked until i watched last thursdays naruto shippuden. girly girly girly. well i hope this is not the end of haku, becuse i love him to much. please just let him be hooking up with sai.

I'm bad at leaving reviews, but I had to do one for your story since it is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I don't even like Sasuke! Your greatest strength, and what keeps me coming back, is your character development and your handling of the relationships between characters; it certainly rivals many of the fiction pieces I have read. I usually come to AFF for the kinky stuff, but when I found your fic I kept reading and reading. I've especially enjoyed the development of the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto, although their constant ups and downs are getting a little old. When the love triangle with Haku was introduced, I almost groaned in despair, but you have managed to avoid many of the cliches. What I look forward to the most is how Naruto will handle the kills he has to make, and what kind of person that will lead him to become. Do we get to see more familiar characters (Kakashi, Yamato, Ibiki, Shizune, etc.)? I'm starting to forget some of the plot points now (like what was the host club Sai worked at when he saw Jiraiya, Naruto and Sasuke?); you've got more than a novel here! Thank you so much!

I was worried that Haku wouldn't have come clean to Sasuke...or anyone for that matter. That would have really made things bad. You've done a great job making Sai likeable but very despicable. LOL Thanks for the wonderfully speedy update to this story. I was so thrilled. I was thinking Karin would be able to figure out what was going on between Naruto and Sasuke. I'm thinking she still might. Is she a fan-girl??? Haha. Maybe Haku can win Sai over? I'm just really excited. I look forward to the next installment. Thank you for all your hard work.