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First I missed you:) Second Babygirl that was an awesome chapter!!! WoW! I loved the fact Naruto has decided that a box of tissue and lotion was the way to go:) It tickled me that you said you want to see what happens to. I don't write but I always hear author say the story takes on a life of it own. I'm guessing this one is like that for you?! I can tell you for sure I love your story and I will be around to the finish too ^_^

i had so much fun reading this chapter and the last one. sorry about not comenting on it but whenever i would reread it, i would get anime nose bleeds(or felt like i was going to). this chapter had me laughing first with kisame comment on itachi being more attractiive and then naruto pictureing sasuke playing a shamisan(?).but is jiriaya truely just useing naruto. or is it all in naruto head. and what will happen to sasuke. he made a vow naruto and i bet it would amnesia to get him to break . that or temporary insanity. naruto on the otherhand, well the moron keeps on choosing girls who look like sasuke in one way or another. and will the syndicate have naruto target sasuke or itachi. oh the drama. bring it on. please update soon.


ps what is D-E-D. is that ded without the a? and where is the everyones favorit green eyed red head? bring gaara in please. and give haku someone who wont break his heart or try to kill him

The ending of that chapter was so freaking endearing, and romantic, and sweet, and i am so sad they have to part D: !! But I know its a must to reach their goals. Their coupling was so incredibly hot, and finally!! Happy times all around, Sasuke should wake Naruto with molestations every time he goes to sleep! Naps included!! Lol, the romantic aspect of this chapter aside, this extra long chapter was amazing! From their all of sudden right now departure dates to what they found in Sai's apartment, Kabuto, is going to know somethings up when 4 of his officers fail to contact him, and then its only a matter of time before Orochimaru finds out and blows a gasket. I'll be looking forward for the next chapter!! XOXOXs Kei-Chan~!

Sooo Sweet and beautiful. I loved this update. Thank you so much for all your hard work. I look forward to more.

OH...MY...GOD! they had sex! and that was freakin HOT as all get out! I mean seriously I did not expect you to have them have sex all the way yet I had hoped, but I thought they were just going to fool around ALOT and you were gonna a tease us but then they were going to get all I think we should wait sort of thingy but nooo they freakin went all the way and I am like shocked and sqealing like a little fangirl and bouncing in my seat all excited....but damn the endding was like the saddest and sweetest thing ever, it makes you want to melt and go awwww and then cry because they had to leave each other, but I am glad that Sasuke is going to be with his brother and that they are all going back to Japan but Im totally glad Shika is going to be with Naruto, he needs someone with him, a friend, someone he can trust, seems like hes never actually had that, even when he had that so call brother like figure he shot, the guy was never really a real friend, so Im glad Shika is gonna have his back, its just sad that they are seperating, but OMG now I am stressing about wether Naruto will have to kill Itachi, Shisui, or Sasuke or Haku or Karin to make himself look more legitimate for Danzou..and hadnt thought of all that till they mentioned that he might have to kill Akatsuki(?)....and YES..it was perfect! I am usually a Sasu top sort of person unless they story is written well that they show me Naru is a good top and of course Naru the big bad assasin is soo a worthy top, but you still didnt make it all about seme or uke, they talked about it and Naru offered but said why it was uncomfortable for him and Sasuke was pissed and awwww this was perfect and DAMN Sasuke is a nasty little thang, a little nookie and some hot Naru body and hes all slutty and wanting more..lol I LOVE that, I would never have pegged Sasuke to like it and want it after his revulsion when living with Oro, but ohh God this was priceless and you didnt make it unbelievable you made it sooo believeable and I LOVED it...and YES! I like that you had that Orochimaru drugged Suigetsu, I mean I dont like that the bastard raped poor Sui but I was uncomfortalbe with the thought of Sui letting himself be seduced just to get close to Oro, but this is way better and much more believable and I love the fact that Sui is planning his own pay back lol, soo like Sui to do it...God there is soo many things stiil left unsaid, what will Sasukes new role with Akatsuki be? The confrontation with Naruto and Danzou? Naruto's first assignments? What Ikegami's reaction will be at seeing Naruto for the first time? I mean how can he not see the resemblance to his adoptive brother Minato? And is the old man Ikegami(?) dad still alive or is he dead? I wasn't sure if he stepped down and let his son take over or if he died...would be interesting to see how he reacts to seeing Naruto since he loved Minato right? Ahhh ok im rambling soo cant wait for more, till later, you be well be safe and be happy, thanks for the fantastic read, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

Hell Yeah!!!!! Oh I'm so happy. This was wonderfully written. I was squealing like a little girl. I'm sad that they won't be together for a while. But it was really cute that they were trying in a round-about way to get the other to confess their love so they would be able to say how they really felt. I want Haku to wake up soon and I'm also wondering who the fourth secret police force operative was. I thought Kimi only sent Sai and two others. I can't wait for more of this. It is one of my all time favorite stories. I'm so glad I gave it a chance.

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I love it! Two reviews in one here. I'm so unbelievably happy that Haku made it, crossing my fingers for a quick recovery for him. I shed a few silent tears while reading the fight "scene", I have to admit that I had been hoping Sai would eventually change sides, for Haku's sake(he seemed so happy with him, even though Sai was the enemy's spy).

The "scenes" between Sasuke and Naruto were filled with passion, and you really managed to get their urgency and desperation to spend as much time together as possible across in a beautiful way, without making it soppy. The love between the two of them hasn't been rushed in any way, and that makes it all so much better.

Keep up the amazing work,

-Sizone

I misses you! I was reading you at ff my name there is roro237. I thought you had pulled your story from there. I got all panickier and I was looking for you! Then I found you in AU. I'm so happy to read you again!! I'm going to keep reading you here. I love your story so much. The way Naruto first thought Sasuke was a girl just spoke to me. I could believe Naruto would think that. You definitely gave us an incredible chapter! Sasuke waking Naroot up oh yea:) I enjoyed their memory making time:)

AHHHH KIYA!!! I am alive! lol, no seriously you have no idea how long I have been trying to get a comment or email or something to you, but man when you still have no internet it is crappy..anyhow just cause I was unable to review does not mean I was not reading I was reading everything and OMG..first I am truly sorry to hear about your loss, I know its coming late but I was unable to say anything when it happened, I know when I was into my writing heavily and and was doing this big Inuyash fic back sometime ago and my father passed away I just sort of shut down and was unable to get back into the writing spirit, but that has been awhile back and all is good, I hope that when you think of your loved one now that your heart is filled with peace and joy at all the love that you have for them and all the wonderful mememories you shared, I know my fathers in peace now so when I think of him now I smile and although I miss him the pain isnt there, I hope God grants you this peace as well....wow it feels funny to talk about the fic after that, but I want to say so much and seriously I dont even know where to start, first I was like OMG they kissed! then OMG they did a little 'bow chicky bow wow' In Naru's room and man that was hot! and they didnt even go all the way darn it but it was still freaking sexy as all get out..and then it was like WHAT! why are you kissing Haku? Why is Haku giving you a freaking blow job? Of course then I was like Naruto you are a little man slut now, you find you like man flesh and now you cant get enough of it and have turned into a man hoe, BAD NARU BAD! Oh ya when they first kissed at the bridge and then got arrested I was like NOOOO Kiya you cant just give us a tease then have them NOT get down to the nitty gritty you tease you! but then you gave us some smexyness so ya thank YOU for that...and then man poor Haku has a broken heart and then Sasuke breaks up with Naruto sort of then then he gets with Karin and that whole thing is just screwed up seven ways to Sunday and I just want to smack all of them in the head! seriously they act like their in grade school sheesh! and poor Karin but seriously after that little pity confesion what did you expect, you only say that stuff if you expect to have them feel sorry for you and reconsider maybe going out with you...girls never tell guys their insecurities unless they are willing to let them use them to hurt us...and dammit I knew from the begining the Sai was a spy but I was kinda hoping I was wrong, but now damn and then I was hoping he would really fall in love with Haku but OMG he is DEAD thank the stars and poor Haku! and awwww Sasu is soo worried about him that is soo cute and unexpected although yes it shouldnt be because hes known Haku almost all his life but still it was a bit unexpected so awwww and now whats going to happen you think they are going to try to keep their relationship quiet so they wont hurt Haku? If they really love him they would be truthful so Haku wont get hurt when he does find out....and man although Sai didnt reveal his info on them to Kimimaru do you think he knows anyway? Oh man this as usual is my absolutely favorite fic and I am dying to read more I cant WAIT! Hopefully this feeble intenet connections hold out and I will be able to comment somemore if not know I am still reading and will find a way to comment when when I can, talk to you later much huggls and love Mija...:-)

Ya Ya I KNOW, I just left a huge review just a minute ago..but I have LOTS of chapters to comment on...this one wont be as big..what I want to know is is Naruto really going to kill people? I mean yes Sergi was teaching him to assinate people and although I dont think he actually killed anyone during training, you never know you didnt tell us EVERYTHNG lol, do you think he can do it? cause if he can then what is the use of coming out of hiding to work with Danzou? And will he and Sasuke be seperated when he does go back to Japan? because omg and cant see them NOT together, its like the only way they are going to survive and I dont know why I feel like this, but I think the only way they are going to defeat their enemies it together, they have to be together, they were bought together for a reason, but if Sasuke is with Naruto then Danzou knows him, hey is Sasuke a wanted criminal? I mean if he were to come out with Naruto Danzo cant do nothing to him can he? but then that just puts a huge target on his head and he would be killed not that Naruto would let him...Im soo confused..Im eager to find out whats going to happen next but worried about it as well, and is Jiraiya reall going to be the next big boss? the new hefe? lol, he gonna come out of retirement to take over the reins for Naru? he'd make a good boss, perverted but fair me thinks..and what the heck has happened to Suigetsu! is Orochimaru using him did he rape him? How about Juugo will he betray them for Kimimaru? man and what the heck are Itachi and Shisui doing? where are them? Things are soo heating up and I am soo exited..ok ok, I gotta calm myself...whew! ok, thanks for all those excellent chapters and the amazing writing, looking forward to more, till then be safe be happy and be well, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)