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Pft, I don't know why you were worried anyone would skip over this chapter. If this is how you write your "filler that isn't really filler" chapters then you, my dear author, should be a Naruto-filler-arc writer because this chapter was a thousand times more interesting than that shit they try and pass off as Naruto when they try and take a break from the original story line!!! So basically as always, this chapter was absolutely amazing! You definitely deserve more attention than you are getting. The only reason you haven't exploded as an author here yet is probably because you are a "new" author to the site and a lot of people look for specific authors when they choose a story. But fear not, keep writing exactly the way you are and you will gradually get more and more views, ratings, and comments. I have no doubt that you will be one of the most popular authors on the site in the future. You honestly have an amazing voice in your stories that I envy you for. I honestly wish I could write like you. Anyway, the plot is thickening and I couldn't be more excited! I can't wait to see where you go with all of this new information. I was so excited to see you had updated when I logged on today so thank you for making my day that much more interesting. Also, thank you for the shout outs in your author notes =D they always make me super happy! Though these reviews are my thanks to you for writing such a wonderful and intriguing story! Obviously I am super excited for the next chapter and can't wait until it comes out. Thanks again for the update!

Honestly,this is probably my favorite story that I am reading right now and it is definitely making my top 5 for my all time favorites!!! Another great chapter! I absolutely love the raw emotion you put into your characters and the fluidity of the story is unparalleled. As always, I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for the update =D

omg I love this, but what the heck is wrong with you Sasuke, if your family gift is to see the truth with those gifted eyes then why the heck would you deny it when it tells you someone is good?? Stupid Sasuke *pouts* Hes just sexually frustrated as you can tell with the massage he got from Haku hehehe and doesnt realize hes all hot and bothered for Naruto and hes just trying to subconsciencly get rid of him to save his pride, stuped man....and oh what does Orochimaru have up his sleeve now? Can Sasuke change his mind after he judges them? Or is Naruto doomed for Guden? Love the interaction between Sasuke and Asuma too kinda first time I havent seen his mentor friend be Kakashi so it was refreshing, and I love Hakus character too, but poor thing is destined never to have Sasu for himself lol, anyhow keep up the awesome work, cant wait for the next chapter and thanks bunchs for the wonderful read, till next time, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

Cool, I finally find out who he killed, glad to know it was pretty much self defense, but damn I didnt expect Sakura to die like that and hey I dont mind Hetero at all I just prefer SasuNaru together lol, but I am still a healthy red blooded straight female who does like her regular porn lol, but seriously Naruto is too much of a nice guy, seriously why did he have to take on the old doctors debts?? they werent his and all the crap the old mans sister put him threw should of been enough to pay of the debt of him saving his life....and I am glad that stupid Kojimi(?) got shot, how could he do that to Naruto?? Oh ya, hes yakuza lol, soooo first captian is Sasuke huh?? I wonder what Sasuke has planned for Naruto and why is Shika being so nice to Naru??? because hes a good guy or is there alterior motives??? ok ok I know I shall find out soon enough, loving this fic, thanks for the awesome read, cant wait for more, till then, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

Another amazing chapter!!! Also, I just read Just One Night With You in about a day and a half. It too was simply amazing! I am so excited to see what you do with this story! Thanks so much for the update!!! XD

Oh this is starting off to be a wonderful story and I can already see the openings for things to happen, but sometimes I have to wonder at Sasuke's stupidity at wanting to behead Naruto so badly in the begining and when he finally gets what he wants its not what he wants anymore because he is in love with him lol, but of course I soo see him doing this for the start, again loving how this is starting, details are nice but not overly drawn out that they take from the story and that tickles me silly thank you.......and I was just wondering are you the same Kiyasama from FFNet who wrote Just One Night With You? Because alhtough I read it when you first wrote it like ages agao lol, I started reading it again a few days ago and just finished the last chapter last night and here I find myself finding another one of your awesome fics to start anew with, thank you for the wonerful read, for the older fic and of course the lovely new one I am angsish to read more about very soon, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

Very interesting plot and an equally interesting approach. Mixing times, customs, beliefs, religions, obsessions, dogmas... I like your writing and the balance between first person stories of the main characters. I'm waiting for more, to see what have you in mind.

This story is simply captivating. I have yet to read anything quite like it here on AFF. The plot is both eloquently written and extremely creative. The way you capture the essence of your characters is also amazing. I was so excited to see that you posted the second chapter and I am really truly looking forward to your next update! Great job, I can't wait to see what happens next!!! XD