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Another great chapter!!! I absolutely LOVED Sasuke's part and how you momentarily made me hate him until you explained what happened in his head! I can just see the fatal/sexual attraction between the Naruto and Sasuke! It is physically tangible!!! I love it! I am so excited to see where you are going with this story, and I can't wait to see Naruto and Sasuke finally clash!!! It is going to be so so so epic! Every chapter just gets me more and more excited and more and more anxious. Great job!!! =D As always, I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

naruto will be in huge trouble when sasuke gets back. cant wait to read about their fight. i have suspicions on who will pitcher and who will be catcher. oh and thankyou for not haveing sasuke kill enoh(ino). is shikimaru dating temari(spl?). cant wait for the blood and carnage to come( i just finished watching claymore).

awwwwwwwwwwww Sasuke kun is a mannn now...lol....but omg ewww, just ewww Oro doing that to poor Sasu I wanted to be sick, I mean I felt your pain my poor poor Sasu..and ya I tend to have a lot of quesitons but that is me, and ya I am a gal lol, and omg I KNEW it I knew Oro did SOMETHING for Sasuke not to be able to tell how evil he was wit those eyes of his, those dam eye drops and that fact that Sasuke knows is good but that he still takes it is bad but ya I know Sasu you cant help it sweety...and ummm with Ino...okay least it wasnt with Sakura sorry I dont hate Sakura but I just dont seee her with Sasuke EVER at all in any universe and oooh I loved the interaction between Haku and Naruto all the new info Naruto is getting but he is assuming more than he should but I understand his fears and reasonings and I cant wait to see what happens, God I wish Sasuke would of socked Oro cut I know he couldn't at least not yet but I cant wait till he does...sigh, anyhow awesome as usual so looking foward to the next chapter, and I still dont buy Oro's excuse about the fight and it being alright, it still reeks and I wonder how other will take it...hmmmm it will give Asuma another thing to shove into Sasuke face and say seeeee? is this what your family would of wanted? would Itachi be proud of this? which is mean but I get what he is doing, cant wait for more till then keep up the amazing work huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

I really liked this chapter. I like how you portrayed Ino. I can't wait to see her part in all of this, and who she was talking to. The ending had me wondering if Danzo and orochimaru both want Sasuke dead? Anyway, your stories really interesting. I normally don't comment on stories because it takes too long to type on a kindle, but I just had to let you know how much I appreciate your story. It's very well written.

Ahhhhhh! Sooooo good! I am sorry that I missed you're last update. My college just reopened and my professors are brutal. This was the first time I could sneak away to read your lovely story. I was so surprised to see you had posted 2 new chapters. I had no idea that I had been away enough time for that (even though your updates are always super fast!) Anyway, I am so excited to see this battle to the death and I am even more excited to see all the pieces of the mystery come together. I really can't wait to read your next chapter. I fall more and more in love with your story with each new chapter! I wish I could leave a longer reply, but I have class in 5 hours and I need to be awake in 4 so I really must head to bed! Thank you again for the update. You always brighten my day!!!

OMG there is sooo much to comment on but my head is spinning lol, but seriously I was wondering while I was reading that if Sasuke would suffer a culture shock since it seemed he rarely leaves his home, and he did lol, hmmmm and the Ino (Enoh) lol on that one is intrigueing lol so intrested in finging out who she workds with and what their plans are, they seems to be against Oro but not nessiarily Sasuke just yet, and omg a fight to the death?? those greedy ebil bastids, seriously twisted freaks, how can they possibly pass that off as any sort of religious rite? Freaks and poor Sasuke he and Naruto are gonna have to fight at the end!!! But I am curiuos if Sasuke sees all this dark black evil aura's eminating off of the others why cant the see it coming off of Orochimaru? Cause we know he HAS to be evil right? Is it just that Sasuke has just been desensitized to him since hes been with him since he was little?? Oh and loved the dream my heart ached for Sasuke but he desearved it,it is all his fault he should feel guilty but dont worry Sasu I still LOVE YOU, and I dont know the image of Sasuke with high water pants sort of made me laugh I pictured a nerdy looking Sasuke with a tight fitting suit and it made me giggle hystericly I know it didnt look that way but the high water pants just bought the image up to my head, ahhh goood times, anyhow so much to look forward to and to anticipate I was so fearfel for Sasuke during the time in the party, I was like dont drink that drink its drunggged! Dont look to Oro or Kimmy cause you know they would bend you over and help rape you not help you! So ya I was scared for poor SAsuke's virture so I am glad its still in tact, and Sasuke's suit was bugged huh? but who bugged it? Orocimaru or Ino and her group?? Hmmmmm, cant wait for more awesomeness, till then keep up the great work, thanks for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

awwwww poor Naru, the darkness is taking its hold upon him, I just hope he manages to keep some of his humanity in tact, he dont need to let Sasuke bastid take it all away from him, some times is so hard to see how those two will ever form any kind of good bond or romance with such hatred and bad feelings but I know you will do it and if not well its still an awesome read and it rereshing to know that at least Sasuke feels some sort of guilt and remorse at the thought of what Naruto might of suffered at the hands of his unjust sentnce...and as for not being about to post a review it was odd it would let me write it out but not actually post it up so I dont know what the heck was going on, but everything thing seems find now, the security thingy at the bottom wasn't there last time so I figure thats why it wouldn't let me and I have no idea why it wasnt there but its back and alls good, anyhow I cant wait for more and as always the interaction between Asuma and Sasuke is so funny and nice to witness, I do however wonder what Orochimaru wants..dun dun dun....cant wait for more of your awesome writing looking foward to it as always, till then keep up the great work, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

i have been following this story since you have posted it. i am sorry that i have not reviewed until now. i forgot my old username and password from several years ago and it has been some time since i have read a story that just says make sure the author completes the task. your characters are believable and have retained there all their quirks. the story does not go right to the sex( all though i don't mind that normally), all together a compelling read. you also put my favorite yaoi couple together. keep up the good work. but out of curiosity , who will be the seme/uke?

I think I died a little inside when I finished reading this chapter. It was so amazingly good that I am literally dying to read more; seeing that the chapter was over left me desperate for more and depressed that I had finished. I absolutely cannot wait to read the next chapter. I have never looked so forward to reading a story on here. Words can't describe how much I am worshiping you right now. If you aren't already, you should seriously consider becoming a professional author. This story is better than some of the books I read and I have no doubt that you would make it big if you were to write a book and have it published. I am not just saying this to boost your ego either, I honestly think you have the potential to become a very famous author. This chapter just blew me away (all of your chapters have been amazing) but the raw pain, fear, and anguish that you were able to portray in your characters was breathtaking and gut wrenching all at once. As always, thank you so much for the update and I will literally be glued to my computer screen in anticipation for your next chapter!!!

Oh WOW, how can you even say this is filler, filler is fluff, silly and just not relevant to the story at all, but this is vital, its information we need to know and omg it was a LOT of information and I am sooooo biting my nails in anticipation and anxiousness now waiting for the sh*t to hit the fan, Naruto decendent of big yakuza crime family??? who would even follow him now though? Would anyone remeber the Senju? Well Asuma did and he isn't part of the syndicate, or iiiisss heee??? lol, and omg I wanted to weep for poor Haku but I love his story and how he came about being Sasuke's manservant, Zabuza'a lover and in general there, and now I know about Shika, lol that is also good to know, I cant wait for more this was an awesome chapter, I loved it thanks for the great read and I am sooo looking foward to more, till then keep up the amazing work, hugggles and smiles Mija..:-)