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I liked this chapter. It's interesting how you made it heavy in some parts and funny in others. I loved Naruto's last prayer about not accidently commiting suicide. I cant wait for the next chapter.

i was scared for aminute there. i thought orochimaru was going to rape sasuke. thankyou for not doing that to me. on another note, i knew it was itachi from the very beggining. sasuke and itachi reunion should be similar to minato and naruto(sasuke punches itachi in the stomach. and adressing the comment about gudan being the climax, those boys have way to many issue then to have one or two fights then become lovers. they have got to learn how to respect each other. you have good instincts for this story. keep up the good work and update soon

i can't wait for the next chapter. Gudan's finally started. Get ready for the fight of your life Naruto;)

well worth the wait. i had been checking scence wensday. only a chappie or two away from the gudan fight. hopefuly orochimaru is killed by sasuke. i still think itachi is the head of akatski. but one request. please dont just make their feelings switch from hate to love. lthey have baggage to deal with and that would cut their story short. let them slowly the others good qualities. naruto sasuke love forever

OMG OMG OMG they are going to fight! Oh I cant wait! Naruto cant fight with that wooden sword thingy, it is a wooden sword right? lol and I know Sasuke is going to do some damage but lord I hope Naruto gets some hits in, and hopefully Sasuke wont be a spoil sport and mega bully and have Naruto thrown into the dungeon afterwards...now seriously I must say the part with Kaname seriously pissed me off, I mean I was like, WTF?? is that woman out of her ever loving mind? What reason in her little pea brain does SHE have to be pissed that Ino or ANY woman was in Sasuke's room other than her when she had shown Sasuke by signals that she was more than willing to warm his bed? I mean who what the heck makes her think he even comtemplated her??? and then to do that to Ino because she was jeolous? She had no claim stupid woman! Orochimaru has more reason to be jeolous of Ino than Kaname, hes been trying to get in Sasuke pants since Sasuke was eight...the freak, but at least HE has the better claim, albeit sick, Kaname just has her dim witted fantasies that no one but her believe.....ok ok I vented, as you can see people like Kaname piss me off, like Karin and Sakura and Ino in the Anime they act like Sasuke belongs to them and they just piss me off so bad, no ONCE has Sasuke EVER shown a hint of affection or even attention that they even exist in his realm and yet they claim him as theirs...they drive me nuts...le sigh, as usual this is a wonderfully written and amazing chapter and I am looing foward to reading more, I thank you for the awesome read and cant wait till the next chapter, till then keep up the great work, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

Oh wow, a fanfic with actual substance. I really like the chapter lengths and the character development that is taking place. Keep up the good work, can't wait for updates.

i knew ino was set up. and i hope sasuke cuts off orochimaru smaller head. i bet that the person asuma will set up with sasuke is itachi. just a hunch. i cant wait to see how sasuke and naruto relationship will evolve. update soon please. i look for updates all tbhe time.

Oh a new chapter! and omg Ino is dead...I soo did not expect that, it blind sided me, awwww and was Sasuke in lurve?? Literal or figurtivly speaking??? It does stand to reason that he would feel some affection towards the woman he lost his virginity to and really, he was totally adorable in his naivete(?) awwww and the memories/dreams were heart wrenching, I love the part where he promises his mom that when he grows up he wont ever be late for dinner, that was so precious! But seriosly I get Haku and even Shikamaru a bit in defending Sasuke but I see them stating Sasuke's side, NOT getting angry and expecting Naruto to NOT be angry and forgive Sasuke, because HELLOOOOOOO, Sasuke sentenced him to death! and hes been nothing but an ass to Naruto and hes going to behead Naruto, so ya, I dont think its to much for Haku and Shika to comprehend that asking Naruto to feel for Sasuke plight is a bit to much to ask for...ok I vented, cause seriously sometimes people just ask way to much from our dear Naruto, but alas that is who he is and thats is why we love him....so he will befriend Sasuke cause we know he will and they will fall in love and battle the evilness that is Orochimaru and whomever it is that wants to hurt Sasuke, lets not forget Danzo yes must kill Danzo to, if for nothing else than for just being creepy, always thought he was creepy...thanks for the wonderful read, cant wait for the next one, I hope the problems with your computer can resolved not for our sake but for you, I know how much it sucks to have computer problems in general, till next time, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

aww, you killed off Ino. I really liked her character. Oh well. I really like this chapter. It's interesting how you portrayed Sasuke's inner tormoil. I also thought it was very clever to have Haku try to get Naruto to see how flawed and human Sasuke is. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

something is afoot my dear watson. i think ino was setup. and i wonder how naruto relationship with sasuke will change. and i also have to sympathize with naruto. naruto has every right to hate sasuke. sasuke ruleings on naruto were out of spite. just because he said that he did not know that his underlings were rapeing naruto doesnt make him innocent. if haku shikimaru say dont judge sasuke, they should also say the samething to sasuke. at least asuma is. after saying that, sasuke can see when he is doing something stupid,like in the previous chappie. he is not completly amoral( that spot is for orochimaru). i am just saying he should take responsability for his action instead of saying some excuse.
after diatribe i realy am enjoying rhe story. even the parts i dont like, because it makes the story more realistic. shikimaru and haku had a realistic point judgeing someone thst naruto doesnt know. it will be a fun to read. evedn when i go all wtf(lol). and i understand frustration of haveing your laptop go on the blink. it happend to me before during and after the new year. more frustrating when it happens again aweek after i just got fixed.