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Ok...I registered just to leave a comment...I hate you so much in this moment T.T How can I live without knowing what is next? -insert bawling- You certainly know how to create tension and clifhangers. And I love the way you portraied the characters in your work. I think you expresed the personalities of Sasuke and Naruto almost like in the original manga. I respect that, because I had read fiction that just failed in this aspect, like epicaly....And the story line is original and well developed...
And now your story is the second on my list that I watch like a hawk for the next chapter to appear (first place is still Kyuubi the Bitch)

i must apologize for my rant. someone on facebook, who didnt no me, had called me a name and i took it really bad,. then i read your update and was still realing from the negative comment. so i am sorry for taking my feelings out on you. now onto this chater. the narusasu love is growing. and i like the fact that itachi and sasuke were able to clear the air between them. i loved sasuke response to shisui(fliping him off). and that bathroom scene, yumm yumm. if karin is smart, she will set up hidden cameras. and take candid pictures. she could make a fortune. unfortunately when haku finds out he will make karin death look like a accident. oh and can you give haku someone to love. i like him to much to have him be a third wheel. it would be mean. and will the two perverts make it on to the story( kekashi/jiraiya).
i also loved it when itachi got pissed beyond all pissyness, when he found out that orochimaru had assalted sasuke. i have yet to think of a death painfull enough for the basterd.
i always look forward to your updates, if i am raw over something next time i will wait untill the next day to read this wonderfuly emotional story. oh and when will we meet tamari. i hope she is not dead. update soon please

Omg, my heart just broke for Itachi! Sasuke just broke his brothers heart, made me want to cry and at first I was pissed off as Sasuke but then I started to think of his point of view, in his life all hes ever seen is Orochimaru's warped desires and activities and for him none of them were pure, love, something beautiful, Oro made it about lust and greed, power, like with all those parties where young boys served powerful men as bed toys, so he had Oro teaching him with his religion that two men being together is a sin and then Oro showing him the sinful side of those things and why it is a sin, and why Oro got away with it I have no freaking clue the man is weird and Sasuke is just to gullible, he is soo easily led around, I feel sorry for him inaway, hes an over grown child looking for what he never had, acknowedgment and praise yet from all the wrong people, ya thinking manga,,,and oh my GOD Minato was that close to the head of the syndicate? Like little brother close? I wonder if Oro made a mistake in telling the head dude about Naruto, because I dont know if it was just me but the boss sounded almost I dunno, hopeful that Minato really had a son? Like maybe he regretted Minato's death? Or now that Kojima is gone Naruto is the next best thing to an heir the dude has no? I mean geez something has to go Naruto's way for once and I soo cant believe that Naruto is still considered a criminal after all that crap, he earned his damn freedom in Gudan, he fought to the death, he just didn't happen to strike a killing blow although it was a bad one to Sasuke, by the rights of what was said he is free and if he is considered dead then even better they cant try a dead man right? Ah so confusing, anyhow I was totally estatic to see a new chapter up so early I squeed! I cant tell you how happy I was, as always this story is fantastic and I cant seem to get enough, I look foward to more and cant wait till the next chapter, till then be safe, be happy and be sane lol, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

wow orochimaru is a first rate ass. and people who are medicaly drugged should not be held accountable for what they say. and sasuke has been living with the king of kreepers(and king kreeper likes men)sasuke opinion will be bent. he is not unreasonable(excluding naruto). i dont think itachi is being a good big brother. he left sasuke to orochimaru. a big brother would have gone to him much sooner.
i am a big sister and have told people that if it comes down to somethingor someone vs my family, i will alwats choose my family. done with the ranting, now on to the good stuff. their is a change in the wind for naruto and sasuke. they are finaly not trying to kill each other physicaly or emotionaly. a truce is in the wend. they will take the bad with the good. sasuke will say something mean to itachi( not in druged state). naruto will clean his clock for it, then go to itachi and comfert him. sasuke will see amd be jealouse pissy. they will have a fight (narusasu)air out their true feeling. screw like rabbits. then sasuke will realise that he was a prick to his brother, and apologise t o itachi and shisui. they go kill king kreeper and danzo. that is my prediction. just one question. who will be haku prince charming? he needs some sugar.

Aw, don't worry. I shouldn't get fired for 'cleaning' the restroom. I typically sneak off there on the regular bases.
But OMG over chapters 18 & 19! I totally had a feeling that Itachi & Shisui had something going on. :D I can't wait for more and to see Sasuke's 'rebirth'

Omg Omg that was hilarous! Dancing roaches! Singing! God that just hit me in the funniest way and then the last part where Sasuke wanted to scream then slap Shisui as he hobbled as fast as he could to the bathroom, I had the image of it in my head and it was soo funny, and ooooh Shisui and Itachi? Hot! Well Haku is out lol, unless they want to share, oh hey thats what you meant by threesome! lol, but arent Shisui and Itachi cousins? related? So is Sasuke freaking out over the whole gay factor, which I personally think he is the little drama gueen lol, or that combined with the incestiuous aspect? Does Sasuke even Know Shisui is related? Are they related or just friends? so confused, any I am loving this for some odd reason I thought they would be staying out in some ratty off the road jungle sort of place in a hut sort of bamboo shack thingy away from the city, that they are in apartments are soo much better I like it alot and they can blen in better, and omg Naruto LOVES it! how cute and Sasuke is in hell! ooh the horror! again hilarious, and ok ewwwwww Naru hands off Karin, ok she has a bod and all but but well she is not for YOU! lol, but tis funny that he wants in her pants and Sasuke knows it and is jealous hehe love his jeoulousy even if he wont admit it,,,,oh man I cant wait for the confrantation between Sasuke and Itachi, that is if Sasuke gets the courage to do it lol, thanks for another awesome read, cant wait till the next one, till then be safe happy and healthy, huggles and smiles Mija..:-) PS..LOL having my babies could be toxic they tend to be over bearing demanding little butt heads lol....

you have done it again. danceing cockroaches. i just about laughed histericaly. in all reality sasuke is handling it well. i have stayed the night in a place similar bar/motel to that. i still have nightmares and that was when i was in sevnth grade( many moons ago). there was a shared bathroom( probably for the whole establishment) it was scary.
i cant wait to see the conversation sasuke and itachi will have. i realy cant blame sasuke if he goes a little balistic on itachi. its a lot to swallow all at once. and to top it all off, he lived with a pedophile. his views on homosxuals most likely will be majorly skewed. most likely he will need time, and naruto luvin(raise eyebrows)
i have one observation that i feel is needed. translation for korean words and phrases would be a major blessing since( im assuming)most people reading this dont speak korean. i dont and it would help if i knew what the phrases or singular words ment. other then that you your story is awesome and you are my second favorit auther in the world. first goes to sherrilyn kenyon. read her stuff, its good, and published. if you are then let me know what you have written. i would love to read it.many thanks for the awesome update. i like how this story is long but it doesnt feel like your just repackageing the same chapter over and over. naruto and sasuke are growing, and it is fun to watch them grow and mature.
well gotta post this before i say to much and give you sasuke ego. have a great week, and update soon

New to the story & I took a day to read all 17chaps. I mean like I hid in the bathroom at work for 15mins to read on 3 different occasions because the story's that good! Lol. I totally can't wait for more.

OMG! First I have to say I was TORN!..seriously, my heart broke for Sasuke when he asked in his mind, his child self wailing at why his brother didn't come for him why he had left him, did he not love him? That made me cry, it made me see things a bit in Sasuke point a bit more clearly, I mean I knew it wasn't going to be a happy lets hug and cry manly tears sort of reunion, but man Sasuke was so right, in his mind, his brother had been alive all this time and had not once come for him or let him know he still lived and that in itself is almost unforgivable, thennnn we have Itachi's story, and that too made me cry, we know NOW why he couldnt and didnt come for his baby brother, he thought he was dead and omg how that must of hurt, and then the description of how he he held onto those pictures of his baby brother and Asuma? How he cried over them and they never left his person, that was awwwwww but heartwrenching as well...I mean it must of hurt him as well to know that all this time his baby brother was alive and alone with that snake..But seriously why did I think that Sasuke's attitude or Naruto's would change once out of that hell hole? Damn it seems like they are even meaner to each other now and poor Haku is being torn in half with his love for both, poor Haku, still I think he should be with Shisui, even if it makes Shisui a cradle robber lol, I am pretty sure Zabuza wasn't exactly young and Shisui is ever so much more handsome lol, but Shisui is a cold person, but guess he had to be huh? Cant believe he was working for the man who helped with the murder of his mother and sister as well as all the other clan members, although he didnt know that then, bet it eats him up now that he knows, although hes known for sometime now so he is probably over it..just saying..and omg my jaw hit the keboard in shock when Itachi slapped Sasuke for saying that to Naruto, I mean YA, Sasuke deserved it, but to have it come from Itachi? I was shocked but then very glad, at least Sasuke knows that regardless of anything, as much as Itachi does love him, he will not put up with Sasuke superious behaviour and wont sit back and let him without putting him in place...and darn it just when we are getting into they why's and hows of Naru's Dad and his life, it is put on hold, Im so frustrated, ya I see why Naru would be mad but come on Naru baby have an open mind something must of happened dont you think? Cant hate your dad for being an assasin in the mob you hate when he was doing it before you were conceived lol, wasnt like it was his fault all that other stuff happened, cause as far as I can tell the only ones who really knew were Kojima me thinks and Asuma lol, and awwww its true Asuma was more a brother to Sasu than Itachi was so Itachi can not be jeoulous at ALL even if it wasn't his fault he was gone, the matter is, he WAS gone and Asume was there to look after Sasuke as best he could, and ooh man that part made me cry as well, poor Sasu, his heart is broken..sniffles...oh I cant wait to see what happenes in the new Buk-gu (?) place they will be staying, I know of course they will fight, but I hope their relationship starts to at least grow a bit more, Sasu and Naru's I mean lol, and hmmm wonder what Itachi will think of that relationship since he wouldn't have minded Sasuke with Ino at all, what will he say when he learns his bother is in love with a dude?? lol, any, it did answer ALOT of questions but left so many yet unsaid and added a few more...so does Oro knows about Itachi, did anyone see Itachi at the stadium? Did Danzou? And ok that broadcast was just creepy, poor Naru he has every right to be leary and a bit worried, cant wait for more, thank you thank you for as always giving us an awesome amazing read, cant wait till the next one, but till then keep up the great work, stay safe, healthy and happy, and sane,,*smiles*, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

sorry for my late review. I no longer have internet, so I'm using my parents. I really like this chapter. ver well written and interesting. I can't wait to see how Naruto and Sasuke get along in Korea.