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Oh My God I loved it! I was pissed that Naruto had to waking up alone. Then the banshee shows up and I'm really feeling sorry for Naruto. But thank goodness Sasuke comes over and all's right with the world:) Then BAMB big brother come and poor Naruto. I love your story!!! ^_^

I hope you didn't think I was criticizing you on the thing with the drive--I was just sharing what it made me think of, which was all the bad road trips I've ever been on living in this part of the country, LOL. As a teenager I wouldn't have had the courage to drive around for hours like that, so I'm really impressed with you for being such a free-spirit. :) I'll share a road trip story with you as well: During college some friends from So. Cal decided to blow off work and go to Vegas for a few days during Memorial Day. They left mid-week, but decided to come back on a Sunday when everyone was coming back. It was bumper to bumper on all the freeways when the driver saw a service truck pulling off the highway and onto a dirt road. She flagged the guy down and asked if he was going to LA and if they could follow him. The guy said sure, so they spent the next six hours off-roading in the desert in a Honda Civic praying the trucker knew where he was going. Despite all that, my friend says they still got back a good 2 or 3 hours sooner than they would have if they'd stayed on the highway. :P

Anyway! As for the chapter, I felt bad for Naruto wanting to sleep with Sasuke because he felt like he should take what he could get, like this was his only chance to ever do something like this. :( It's probably OK since Sasuke's character type isn't one to casually get involved with people, but under other circumstances, sleeping with such a mysterious person on the first date (let alone losing your virginity to him!) could really have backfired on Naruto. :( I'm glad Naruto did question Sasuke about his argument with Shikamaru, and about his behavior, about why he wouldn't speak to him in English in the beginning, so clearly he's not an idiot or a pushover, he just needs to work a little harder at solving Sasuke's mysteries--like asking him how he knew where Shikamaru lived, or that Naruto was even living with him in the first place. (And of course, Sasuke's family name, his age, what he does for a living, LOL, all the little stuff...)

Looking forward to seeing how things progress between them, and to reading the future fics you've got planned with these two. (I do like magical themes!) ;)

WOW!!! Amazing!!! That was all like a dream date fresh from my mind, how DID u know?XDD I can't help but think Sasuke is a drug pusher or some pimp getting Naruto ready for making money for him, LOL. I really wanna know what the history between Shika and Sasuke could be and why Shika's so angry about the things going on between Naruto and Sasuke. I can't wait to find out about Naruto's past is there more to be found out in the story or was that about it with the bad treatment of the orphanage staff? I can Not wait for the next chapter and thank you for saying that you'd post it soon.X3 I really like this story!

Mysterious and sexy wOw what a great combination! I'm looking forward to more ^_^

Yeah, I like cliche as well. This is definitely a good story in the making and I look forward to seeing the triangle maybe between Shikamaru, Naruto and Sasuke.

Their are no words to describe how much i love this chapter, it is beautifully written and its only the second chapter :) I look forward to more from you :D

I love this story. :) Its awesome. Lol

I like this story. It was impossibly cute in the first chapter but now it's more. I'm curious if Sasuke will turn out to be bastard or not.

I don't know if I left a review before, but I really like your story. I wonder why Shika did not talk to Naruto before he left? Is Sasuke married? Is he a gangster? Is he an evil bastard? (well yeah he kind of is an evil bastard), but I'm not sure what else is going on. Can't wait to find out more.

I realllly hope sasuke doesn't break naruto's heart!!! Im also curious as to why nara doesnt like him!!! I hope to read the next chapter soon! Thanks for the new chappie!!