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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! Poor Naruto has had such a tough life but hopefully it starts getting better now. :)
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, Naruto finally meets Sasuke. How will this go? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, Naruto finally meets Sasuke. How will this go? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice
I'm liking where this is going
your doing a great job
I can't wait to see what happens between sasuke and naruto
especially when the smut comes in (sorry Im a perv lol)
hope you update soon
can't wait for it =D =D =D =D
update update UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD
I'm liking where this is going
your doing a great job
I can't wait to see what happens between sasuke and naruto
especially when the smut comes in (sorry Im a perv lol)
hope you update soon
can't wait for it =D =D =D =D
update update UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(snickers) Ah, that one line about the plastic surgeon saying she was in the prime of her youth was great. I can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start - looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Flawless descriptions you have there. I found the defensive mechanism funny. :D And padawan? Tagalog speak? Not too sure. -Rubs head- Oh well. I like the story so far, especially Naruto. He's quite the character, thinking he's one hot piece of ass. Hahah. xD Not that he isn't, I assure you.
Anyway, great job! I look forward to... yeah, well, I look forward to more. ^^
...I wonder if Sa-Su-KAY has a permanent bean pole stuck up his delectable arse... xD
Anyway, great job! I look forward to... yeah, well, I look forward to more. ^^
...I wonder if Sa-Su-KAY has a permanent bean pole stuck up his delectable arse... xD
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. It's getting good. =)
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good! Everything is well established and well written. Looking forward to the next chapter...and the meeting.
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can be your beta! I'm good at correcting other people's work...but a bit careless with my own. If you're still interested then contact me!! Ja ne!