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Just found this story and read it through, and I just love it. I became so sad when Naruto wanted to leave team 7 but now I know it's for the better. He will become a better and stronger person when teamed up with Lee, Neji and Shikamaru. Looking forward to seeing how the new team 7 will handle things and how Naruto and his new team will make progress. And I can't wait to find out what name they will pick for their team.

Great story and very well written. Thank you for sharing

//Helen (newbie at reviewing =)

This fic makes me reconsider the dynamics of the whole Team 7 relationship. I feel so sorry for Naruto, but the entire plot makes sense, and that's great to see in a fanfiction. I also like the pacing of the story; it's both suspenseful and interesting. :D The theme of "change" is pretty consistent, and seeing how Naruto, Lee, Sasuke, and even Ino are trying to change for the better is really heartwarming. I look forward to reading more!

If you're still looking for a beta reader, I'm willing to take the job. ^__^ You can email me at morbidreamscape@gmail.com if you're interested. I read fast, and I will catch most grammar/spelling errors, and can smooth sentence structures or whatnot if required.

God i love this fic! ^^ I hope you update soon and keep up the good work (:

I like it. It is good to see the good interaction between Naruto's new team. Please write more.

Awesome story, I love it! Please update soon I'm dying to see what happens next hehe.

Excellent story idea! I'm really looking forward to where you're taking it. You are right though, it does need a beta, little things like the wrong tense or wrong word usage are distracting from the overall wonderful quality of your work. If you still need one, I'd be happy to help, and if not, I still love the story and hope that your life allows you to write as often as you'd like.

I can't wait to see Ino and Kakashi explain what's going on to Sasuke and Sakura. And Ino finally getting what she's been wanting to say off her chest and tell the other two members of Team Seven off (I'm a big Sakura hater, that is until she grows up after the three year time jump). Maybe even Kakashi admitting his mistake of playing favorites with one of his pupils.

I would like to see more of Naruto's improvement in Genjutsu, Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, maybe even learn a few more jutsu. And what about Kyuubi? Are you going to have Naruto and the Kyuubi converse with each other? And will Neji, Shikamaru and Lee be able to talk to Kyuubi too?

Also, what's with all the brown clothes? Neji wears a light colored shirt, and Shikamaru's jacket is a light color too? Not to mention, Sakura wears red, and Sasuke wears blue and white.

This is a great fic that I have read over and over numerous times. Great job!

Ah! Yes! I remember reading this story once but it only had three chapters the last time I read it. I'm sooooooooooo happy you're updating!

I can't wait to see where this goes. I really, really, really, want to see how this story ends. So please don't give up on it!

great fic, love your story

Hey Cepheus
Great job on this fic. I love your style and the emotional and logical flow that runs through your works. I would love to be your BETA, I have the time and grammatical know how and agree that the grammar missteps are the only thing that interrupts that beautiful you have. So drop me a line if I make the cut and once again great job on this story. I love it! Oh by the way my e-mail is windfall77@hotmail.com.