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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was so cute >_____________________________
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome..love the story idea, hope u get more chaps soon.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...did that review go incomplete or is it just my browser >_> but anyway if it did go incomplete - i want to read more :D really like the whole idea ^_^
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Needs a little work, maybe a beta too. But i do like the concept and what you have so far. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was such a good first chapter, please don't stop now and update as fast as you can.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning, I hope you update soon!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool, very original, definitely a keeper! Just for future reference are we assuming that there is no connection between Gaara and the other sand sibs? Or am I getting ahead of myself? Please continue.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh!! I wanna read more!!! It's sweet! And sexy at the same time *thinking of yaoiness*
You have to write more on this one!! ^^ I'm luwing it already!! (just like your others) ^____^
You have to write more on this one!! ^^ I'm luwing it already!! (just like your others) ^____^
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you wrote this! It's a good beginning. There are one or two grammatical errors, but nothing major. I'm definately looking forward to reading more!
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