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for Sexy no Omake

by bucketmouse

person TaiyChan
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Seems like I missed two chapters, ah well. I read them now. Both very good.

Poor poor Iruka, scarred for life.

Update soon, okay?
person NerNer
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I see I see....I didn't even realize it is Lee.
Good chapter! I loooooove the lemon part, definitely hot and steamy!
Thanks for the update!
person Taito
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY FOR LEE! >3< This is getting really good >3> no more angsty sad dreams? And more happy lovey-dovey ones XD! <33
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, great job, loved it! Update soon, okay?
person jingko
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
still a great story. can't wait for the next chapters
person TaiyChan
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was hot, sad and cute allll at the same time. Great job! Update soon, okay?
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wowza. I have to say, the earlier dream sequences for Kakashi had me scratching my head a bit. Gai's dreams always seemed more understandable to me. But this time.. oh, it all came together so nicely. I'm not a huge fan of dream sequences AT ALL, but reading this one, this has to be one of my favourite chapters in the whole fic. Kakashi's confusion and his realisation and then his absolute desperation, everything just FIT. I love the light Kakashi keeps seeing in the corner of his eye, the gorgeous way you tied it into Gai's heartbeat rapidly increasing and then ceasing during the real fight after opening the gates.

Yeah, it may not be the longest chapter, and it's definitely not the sexiest, but whoa, it's just beautiful. I loved it. I'm so happy whenever you guys update.
person TaiyChan
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooer, perverted little Gai. Lol. You updated fast! Yay!

Great chapter, update again soon, okay?
person TaiyChan
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That.... Was really sad... Who means more to him? Obito or Gai?

Hmm... Update soon, okay?
person TaiyChan
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Kakashi was worried! That's soooo cute!

Poor poor Gai, I hope he gets better soon!

Update soon, okay?

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