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Reviews for Oil and Submission

By : GWRITER
  • From MastaK on March 31, 2024

    yea it obliviously is Naruto with that line of him using clones on her, only Naruto would use clones during sex


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  • From ANON - good on November 08, 2016
    yeah its definitely naruto in disguise, he would be the only one who could do that and have a dick that big afterall sasuke was small like a 1-incher lol no wonder he was so jealous in the anime
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  • From ANON - anon on February 22, 2016
    ya this is naruto in disguise it has to be sasgay doesn't like girls and naruto is a pimp so i say it's naruto
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2015
    make it so naruto is Taki cause after all he's the only one who has the most stamina 2 this anime is called naruto so its naruto who gets the girls and 3 u should already updated ur story what gives? but add all girls in this story, hana tsume tsunade his sister naruko kushina yugito kin karin hanabi hinata ino sakura mikoto ayame etc.
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  • From ANON - Tank on June 05, 2015
    Please continue, this story is amazing
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  • From ANON - Killer33 on February 07, 2015
    Is the story discontinued or not?
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  • From Smiling_Jack on October 11, 2014
    Loved the second chapter and looking forward to a third; hopefully Tsunade will make an appearance in the next couple chapters. I feel like all this activity wouldn't miss her notice. The only thing about Kurenai's chapter that disappointed me was that I kept thinking "When Taiki's reaming her ass near the end, it would have been hotter and more degrading if he hadn't let her suck on his fingers but rather fish hooked her face. The imagery is deliciously degrading and even more so if the subject is a self-righteous/anti-perversion lady such as Kurenai or Tsunade would be. Bringing them down from their high horse as it were about sexuality and perversion is a major turn-on.
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  • From ANON - Irishlad on July 14, 2014
    If there are going to be more people Taiki is going to massage and fuck into submission, can two of them be the Jinchūriki's Fū and Yugito Nii?

    It would be rather sweat to see a powerful and confident kunoichi like Yugito getting fucked into submission like a cheep whore.
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  • From ANON - Milflover on July 13, 2014
    I see you'll have Mikoto coming up, Awesome can't wait for her to get fucked silly.
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  • From ANON - wikipoo on July 13, 2014
    Great second.chapter!! Looking forward to the next one. As far as suggestions go, I would love to see a foursome having the OC with Ino, Hinata and Sakura. Could imagine him doing a bushin for each girl with different reactions. Ino being turned on, Hinata being intially hesitant and Sakura unsuspecting. Then after he gets each with his clone, he could have the grand foursome. Also, PLEASE don't make this where the OC is Naruto. There are enough Naruto harem fics around already.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2014
    Wouldn't surprise me if at the end the character was really Naruto in disguise. That'd lead to some interesting reactions.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2014
    Goddamn! That was smoking hot! More plsease
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  • From ANON - Violatedmonkey on July 09, 2014
    I feel like this story could have been way better if this character was named naruto instead no last name. If its a alternate universe where naruto is just an orphan who became a massuese and entered konoha. As it is now i have no feelings for the main character and he cant pull you in as easily as naruto could.
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  • From ANON - Shunga920 on July 09, 2014
    So Hana, Tsume, Hinata's Mother, either Hinata or Hanabi, Uchiha Mikoto, Uzumaki Kushina, Uzumaki Naruko(?), either Tayuya, Guren, or Kin from Oto, Konan, some civilians from the filler episodes or various foreign Kunoichi (Kurotsuchi, Temari, Shion, Koyuki, etc.), Mei Terumi and/or Tsunade, and others.

    "Certainly looking good" is a bit of an understatement. :-P
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  • From ANON - Zasshu on July 09, 2014
    Fem!Naruto or/and Kushina next plz..
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