Click Here!

Reviews for Oil and Submission

By : GWRITER
  • From Ookami88 on March 16, 2014
    I really find this story enjoyable. I'd like to see Hinata getting off by this guy, she's my fav character and her shyness is really hot.
    Report Review

  • From diablocafe on March 16, 2014
    Interesting story so far. While I would like to see Sakura get her turn, I think the story would turn out better if she is in a later chapter. Though the mom and daughter would be a great way to bring her in. Before her, I'd like to see Tenten, Ino, Kurenai, Hinata or even Hanabi.
    Report Review

  • From lobo_sangriento on March 16, 2014
    very good premise , best he will break every kunoichi very soon with hsi skills
    i recommend having Kurenai or Hinata but personally i would love to see Tsume
    we need more Tsume and seeing him breaking her like a bitch in heat it will be wonderfull
    style was also great seeign how Anko was broken
    Report Review

  • From Ragingspeed on March 15, 2014
    Great first chapter think you should do maybe Hanabi next my favorite character :D
    Report Review

  • From SpartanAlchemist on March 15, 2014
    123rodx already already said what I was thinking so I'll just say "woot" and look forward to more.
    Report Review

  • From glk on March 15, 2014
    I'd like to see someone like Kurenai or Konan. Also, I want to mention that I'd prefer if Taiki isn't Naruto or any other established character. Keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From YaoiLemonadeLover on March 15, 2014
    I think it would be great to suddenly 'find out' that Taiki is really Naruto mostly in disguise (except for his package...).
    Report Review

  • From snake1980 on March 15, 2014
    great job on the first chapter kind of wish there was a anal scene with anko but maybe in the next chapter. maybe the next girl could be tsunade and he will find out if she lives up to her name as the legendary sucker? have to wait and see. keep up the great work
    Report Review

  • From PanicKush on March 15, 2014
    Pretty good so far. Looking forward to much more.
    Report Review

  • From 123rodx on March 15, 2014
    Love the scenario, it is awesome. Feel like the 1st chapter needed an anal scene since it begin with Anko's ass. Maybe next chapter.
    As for girl, could you go for Kushina or a mother/daughter duo like Sakura and Mebuki where one of them fall 1st(the mom) and then help Taiki break the other (the mom in a way betray and in the other teach the daughter the way of pleasure)
    Report Review

  • From finny94 on March 15, 2014
    A great story with great potential,very well written with a good buildup before the actual sex.
    Anko is one of my favourite chicks,but I'd also like to see Ino or Kushina in the next chapters.Keep up the good work man.
    Report Review

  • From Sakuraluv on March 15, 2014
    I suggest Haruno Sakura :)
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!