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Reviews for Nocturnal Dreams

By : Snowway32
  • From WishStarAllie on August 20, 2018

    a really lovely store why did you stop


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  • From ANON - x on September 04, 2014
    I really like this story, I have dreamed up many scenarios for the continuation - but as I have learned in the fanfiction universe Never expect a story to be finished....



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  • From Skyrere on December 21, 2012
    I am enjoying this vamp fic more than any of the others so far. You write these three very well. :D

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  • From ANON - Rebecca on December 20, 2012
    PLEASE finish!! I am in love after reading all 5 chaps in one shot today!!
    Im love the affectionate Madara and fugaku instead of them being douches like usual. Sasukes vunerbility with his fathers death is so adorable and naruto is so darn cute - melt
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  • From ANON - lunayolly on February 26, 2012
    Hi! just passing by (again)! I love to read and re-read your stories. I love it, really! I hope that you continue writing your stories I love them! i really excited to see what will happen next! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - poluskinha on January 19, 2012
    Hi there,

    This is an amazing story. I like that you are not too big on needless descriptions and there are few grammatical as well as spelling mistakes. I have read (or rather tried to read) atrocious things here regarding those mistakes. My mind is forever scarred.

    Am I to assume that Minato gave birth to Naruto?

    Naruto is a very sensitive person and I like that he is highly emotional in this story, and that Sasuke is not such a bastard as some other tend to make him seem. Naruto is very smart and not a "dumb blonde", forgive the offense.

    There is a bit of a gap in the Naruto and Kakashi's background as partners, such as Kakashi's age, if they are roommates, what happened for them to break up again, is Kakashi really so in love with Naruto as it seems, etc.

    The part where Sasuke and Fugaku are outside and Fugaku notices his Light is dying/dead is a bit vague. I'm assuming that since it is from a child's point of view that a few things are skipped but still, maybe a bit more of depth on the environment or what they were doing before Fugaku started back to the house.

    AFF doesn't show the date of the story so I'm not sure if this is a 2006 story or a late 2011 post. So if it ancient, I'm sorry for disturbing, but if not then I hope you continue with your line of thinking.

    In any case, congratulations and thank you for taking the time to write.


    Hugs,


    P.
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  • From ANON - richon on December 08, 2011
    love this story so far !!looking forward for more clues... see you soon
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  • From ANON - Tamara on November 19, 2011
    More please i love this story

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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on November 17, 2011
    I have read all of the available chappies, and look forward to reading the next chappie in the near future :)!
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  • From smint45 on October 30, 2011
    Wow I can't believe I missed a chappie!!! I totally love this story^^ And Sasuke losing control that was so hot ^^ I can't wait for more!!! I really hope to hear from you soon!!!!
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  • From DepressedPoet on October 26, 2011
    I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!XD
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  • From ANON - Uchiha_Red on October 18, 2011
    This was an interesting development in the story. This isthe first time I was allowed to review this story. I liked it when you only had the first three 'chapters' out, but this is one of my favorites. :) Keep going. And I like that idea, Madara being the eccentric good guy. Too often he's been portrayed as the evil and very cold and calculating uncle, even if he's like that in the manga and anime.
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  • From ANON - lunayolly on October 17, 2011
    Nice, very nice! Love the sex scene with Itachi and Sasuke. I love that Naruto knows how to paint. Poor Sasuke remembering his father death by Narutos panting. I hope that Naruto helps Sasuke with his suffering. I think they can relate in some way.
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  • From bloodshound on October 16, 2011
    the nick name is just adorable.
    Neh? If Itachi has his lil bro's as his mates (i assume that's what light and dark are) how do they breed? Or do close family ties not mess with the genetics of the born vamp?
    I hope we can find out who killed of Naru's important people and that Naru can help Sas begin to cope with Fugaku's death and that they can help Naru deal with his losses too.
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  • From quittie on October 15, 2011
    lovely read! I'll definitely be waiting for the next chapters!
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