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Reviews for A Fine Fine Line

By : eksimenrol
  • From Ekiman8 on October 21, 2009
    Still loving this fiction mate.
    Been a couple of months since you've written a new chapter.
    Hope you havn't quit :3
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  • From RichardH on May 15, 2009
    I nearly jumped out of my seat when I saw a new chapter of this, please get your muse back asap, this story is too good to stop
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  • From Arkinine on April 26, 2009
    I greatly enjoy this story. When I am reading it, it feels like the actual characters from the manga. You would be surprised how many people are not able to produce that feeling when writing about other people's work. I think you are doing a fantastic job so far and I am looking forward to the continuation of the story.
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  • From gilbertmaxter on February 16, 2009
    Wow is all i can say, this is a very well written well thought out and very nice chapter overall.

    I would say please make a chapter or whatever you can cause i would like to read more on this story.

    please keep up the excellent work. your an excellent writer.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on February 16, 2009
    Hey eksim. I like the progress in the story. I got to know something though. If Sasuke did put a genjutsu in Naruto's mind. How can he break free of it. Well besides Ino helping him. I just don't know why Sasuke would care about anyone accept him and his revenge. I hope you put more chapters up for your other story soon. I like both POV's ur doing. It makes you think of each person and how they are going to react to certain questions or actions. Take care
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  • From Church on February 11, 2009
    YAY FUCKING UPDATE!!! I like the fluffiness at the end its so damn cute XD. Will Sasuke come to Konoha to abduct her I wonder? since he did put a illusion into Narutos mind. Ill hceck for more updates and hopefully Naruto gets laid!
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  • From gilbertmaxter on January 31, 2009
    Great chapter i gotta say your a very Ultimate writer. i hope to read the next chapter soon, also both of your stories are very great and if i am giving another review to this one in case it didn't go through the first time.

    word of advice: keep doing what your doing!
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  • From Church on January 13, 2009
    FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!! Why did the chapter stop when Naruto was about to wake up from that nightmare!!! Damnit I wanted to know what happened x.x Above all else Good job XD Ill be back for more!!!
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  • From RichardH on January 12, 2009
    nice nightmarish hell you wrote there... and as far as that male/female comment at the end, I'm a dragon, and we're kinda A-sexual
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  • From thas on October 19, 2008
    duck beg and plead is very sound advice. very good plot. good character development. the chapters could be longer but you can't have every thing.
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  • From RichardH on October 03, 2008
    interesting to say the least, I give it a 6 (highest number I give for my rating system, the lowest is 3)
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  • From Ekiman8 on October 02, 2008
    Can't tell you how good this fiction is!
    It really reminds me of how it is to be in love with a person you care for, but in my case, i never got the chance to really show my feelings for that girl.
    But the real beuty of this fic is that it brings back the wonderful memories I had with that special girl.
    Thank for an awesome fic and please, please continue on it for all eternity.

    Thank you!
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  • From Verakum on October 01, 2008
    please get to the date asap... and to the love tooo please..... i beg you

    your fic is sooo good

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  • From gilbertmaxter on September 23, 2008
    Good chapter and that's not a bad idea writing up sakura's POV in the story i was always wondering what she was thinking and doing during some key points of the story.

    anyways can't wait to read them both :)
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  • From Verakum on September 03, 2008
    God..... *cries* that was so beautifull... NARUSAKU FTW.... god... i love you .... update soon please... LOVE, LOVE IS SO PERFECT WITH NARU AND WITH SAKURA MORE

    and please add something hot too :hehee
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