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Reviews for A Fine Fine Line

By : eksimenrol
  • From gilbertmaxter on August 24, 2008
    great chapter i must say, got them looking normal almost as if this is what i believe would be how they'd react if this happen in the manga and anime and i kinda wished it did. lol

    anyways keep up the good work and update soon the story is awesome.
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  • From whitefrost on August 18, 2008
    You have a very thoughtful explanation of why Sakura adores Sasuke so much, yet very little insight as to why Naruto loves Sakura. I bring this up because if they were to get into a serious relationship, there needs to be something more than just sex. Does he lust after Sakura or is there something about her personality that attracts him more than just her body. Also, the way Naruto is describing love and hate shows a wisdom he does not have in the manga. So, yeah, a little off canon.

    I really enjoyed the first chapter; unfortunately, I haven't read past chapter 4. To tell you the truth, it is kind of monotonous to read the same stuff you have already read, just with the addition of character annotations.
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  • From Xenodia on July 22, 2008
    I'm really liking this so far. I can't wait to read what's next! =)
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  • From gilbertmaxter on July 03, 2008
    the chapter is very well written and nicely thought out :)

    i think the chapter and story are great can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From Xenodia on June 17, 2008
    This is really good so far, I can't wait to read what's next =D
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  • From rxtechgirl on June 07, 2008
    I like it! And who the hell am I? No one. Lmao. I can't wat for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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  • From REM1985 on June 03, 2008
    Great stuff so far. I can't wait to see what you do with it.
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  • From Darkmaster7987 on June 02, 2008
    Interesting story, keep it up.
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  • From goodchaos on June 01, 2008
    I really like this!! Hope you don't get info off those FILLERS, god I hate those...
    Anyways I like how your sticking to the cannon! Good Luck, & I'll be looking foward to seeing more!
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  • From matisleonhart on June 01, 2008
    Great start, lets see more
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