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Reviews for Sasuke's Defection and Retrieval: Unedited!!

By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From suzannecmc on December 07, 2011
    because I have to read this periodically.
    BECAUSE.I.HAVE.TO.
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  • From DevilnBlue on June 14, 2010
    I know you are tired of hearing this by now my OMFG... Seriously What the Fuck. You totally fucked up the Narutoversed and created total crack that has me grinning so hard my cheeks are freaking hurting. I had to copy and paste this but my favorite line I think was this... because despite all the randomness in this story this seemed to take the cake: “What else could you possibly have to do? You are sitting on top of your brother’s dead body... which is piled on top of Orochimaru’s dead body... which is draped over Orlando Bloom’s!!”

    ‘Freaking pretty boy’, Sasuke thought, ‘acting like he’s all smexier than me in his stupid elf-tights. I had to do it!’

    Okay... why Orlando Bloom? That was too hilarious and Sasuke is such a freaking perve to think that he's been throwing himself at Naruto since he was 12 and it was only by the miracle of Kami knows what that Naruto kept his virginity for so long @_@

    Even the scene at the Valley at the End was totally random, especially when Naruto is all like 'not again'. But Sasuke made sort of a good point about Naruto's willing to go do all this stuff to keep him except the one thing Sasuke wanted. Almost... I mean almost made me feel sorry for the Uchiha. And the whole almost kiss thing when Sasuke was staring down at Naruto at the end... did sort of look like he was thinking about kissing Naruto but when blondie told his emo-ass to walk while still trying to play dead.

    I swear... this is hot and cute and funny and damn it now I can't stop smiling >
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  • From ANON - Jezabel-Swan on April 08, 2010
    Jesus Christ! That was price-less!
    Bloody Brilliant, couldn't have summed it up better
    ...of course with added perverted-ness on Sasuke's part, plus the Lemon,
    But that, hat was PERFECT!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on February 08, 2010
    LOVE IT!!! as I do all your work. Thank you for being.
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  • From Kerrisa on January 18, 2010
    *Still snickering*

    ' “USURATONKACHI!”

    “SEXUAL DEVIANT!”

    “CHIDORI!!”

    “RASENGAN!!” '

    *More snickering* Well, this time I turned the TV on, so my laughter wouldn't be entirely suspicious xD *snickers some more* That was really funny, and here I said i was going to find some angst to read! Omg you make me laugh xD *Loves on you* XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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  • From suzannecmc on November 19, 2008
    you know, I just had to go back and reread this.
    I almoust forgot how damn funny it is, I can't stop smiling;P
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  • From Leeana69 on September 24, 2008
    HAHAHA, I love the whole 'What about dry-humping? I'll come back for dry-humping' XDDD
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  • From hsbs on May 27, 2008
    Hilarious to sexy in the blink of an eye!


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  • From demona013 on April 24, 2008
    OMG!!! that was freakin awesome.
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  • From ladywolfTerri on February 08, 2008
    *still laughing* all I can say is loved it!!!
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  • From suzannecmc on January 12, 2008
    "OMGWTFBBQ"

    The tears were rolling out my eyes!

    I thought I read everything you wrote, I somehow missed this till now.
    Oh...too much fun!!!
    no wonder you giggled as you typed, you are too funny!

    Thanks:)
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  • From ANON - Astrid on November 14, 2007
    Omg that was easly one of the funniest fics I have ever read. pure crack! you have a great sense of humer. I was laughing my ass off. my roomate eve nasked me what the hell was wrong with me lol. Hope to read more of your fics soon.

    Ja ne!
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  • From charmpit on November 13, 2007
    (sound of manic clapping)

    Ahem. You are insane.

    This is the work of a genius.
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  • From blueh on August 09, 2007
    LOL! This is one hell of a funniest one-shot I've ever read! The Orlando Bloom part was totally unexpected! Hah! Great job!
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  • From Teda on July 20, 2007
    My goodness, I still haven't stopped laughing yet! You truly have a gift for humor and a great writing style. And your funny spin on the whole Sasuke defection makes me want to go back and reread everything again. This story is a 10!!!!
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