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Reviews for Sasuke's Defection and Retrieval: Unedited!!

By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From emp78 on July 20, 2007
    ROFLMAO! That was so hilarious! And the lemon was hot, too. Damn, I love the way you write.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on July 19, 2007
    OMG!!!! That has got to be one of the funniest things I've read in a while. I didn't stop laughing throughout the entire fic! People were looking at me weird, thats how hard I was laughing, and then wanting to know what was so funny. Naturally I could not keep the humor to myself so I shared it with others and they laughed their asses off too! LMAO please continue writing, because there are no words to describe how much I enjoyed this little piece of writing. My best wishes for you and your writing.
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  • From ANON - Luna_Meow on July 19, 2007
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    ROFLMAO!!!


    Sorry for the weirdness, I think I'm on crack *cackles*

    Great story!
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  • From ANON - featherededge on July 18, 2007
    that was freakin' AWESOME! so hilarious.
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  • From ANON - youna06 on July 18, 2007
    My favorite line, ever! “How about dry-humping? I’ll consider coming back for dry-humping!”
    You are a freaking genius. Please never stop writing. Lol.
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  • From Allys on July 18, 2007
    LMAO!! This is hilarious as usual, I love your cracked fiction style XD.
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  • From ANON - fangirl on July 16, 2007
    FUCK!!!! I had to stop reading so many times just to stop laughing. I can't even pinpoint what was funniest...I couldn't believe you killed off Orlando Bloom..that was priceless. Yay crackfic...twas awesome
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  • From SasUke28 on July 16, 2007
    sasuke is really horny........................ and somebody finally noticed it thank you!
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  • From ANON - dragonlay sakura on July 16, 2007
    I have a new appreciation for the crack one-shot! This was hilariously funny and delicious to boot. After all the humor, the sex scene was handled brilliantly. So in other words, IT ROCKED!

    ~dragonlady sakura~
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  • From cerismea on July 16, 2007
    funny!! good funny ^_^
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  • From llyoung on July 16, 2007
    Very funny. I really enjoyed it and look forward to your next story. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - hina88 on July 16, 2007
    looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool heh 'just offer me sex' best line of the whole thing loooooooooooooooooooooool I loved how he used the same lines on Naruto that Sakura used on him, brilliant :D Sasuke's such a pervert lol XD definitely cracked me up ^_6 thanks for this!!!

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - Adi on July 16, 2007
    Ok this was too much

    all too much for me

    I simply can't do revision today

    yup....

    OMG THE CRACK KILLED, AND THEN THE SMUT REVIVED ME AND CAUSED ME TO NOSEBLEED TO DEATH.

    I've had to rewrite my sentences so many times because I can't spell at the moment, that is what the fic did to me

    lol I haven't touched the manga so it was spoiler for me, but does it look like I care? NO! Because it was teh awesome!!!!!!!

    What was it? "preteen pedaphile"? *falls over laughing*

    *cracks whip* back to work with you, I'm just going out for a cigeratte even though I don't smoke XD


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  • From DeviousLilDevil on July 16, 2007
    abso-fucking-lutely hilaraious!! i could barely breathe after reading this much less think. ^__^
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  • From ANON - saki on July 16, 2007
    Freaking hilarious and to the point. You definitely hit all the crazy moments in the series that make you shake your head and go wtf?! Loved it and will definitely read more of your future postings.
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