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Reviews for Flutter

By : Rosebud
  • From ANON - japanese pro on March 22, 2009
    please make this a multi-chap. it's awesome! thank u for writing it.
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  • From ANON - Greyspell on February 12, 2009
    ooohhhh, I'm tearing up, that was beautiful! I want to say something like next chapter or sequel but I think how you left it was perfect. Great story.
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  • From TigeressGV on October 23, 2008
    I do not think that this piece of work in any way "sucked" as you put it. I have never felt such a connection with a character who is depressed. You describe it so well, pardon me if this offends you, but I can tell you've been there yourself. Maybe not that same situation, but something as life-altering. You wrote this story with so much emotion, on both Sasuke's and Naruto's part. For people who don't understand what depression is like, I think this is a very good example of it. Same with having thoughts of suicide. It's hard for me to put into words how much this piece moved me, emotionally. I would love for you to continue on with this, but if you don't, where you stopped is a good point to. He heard the flutter of Naruto's heart, then fade to black. It's up to the reader to interpret what happens next. That's a very nice ending for people who like to imagine what happens next. Although it might be frustrating for some who want to read exactly what happens next instead of think about it themselves for a while and coming to their own conclusion. I think this is a very beautiful piece. And I will definitely be checking out some more of your stuff. Please email me at TigeressGV@AOL.com if you'd like to reply to my review. I think I would very much enjoy a conversation with you. Take care.
    ~Tigy
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  • From Ikippiki on October 17, 2008
    You don't suck at all! I found it very touching and quite original. I hope you will write that second part or is it finished? I'd like to see Naruto wake up. I really didn't see the I-jumop-through-the-window part comming. Jeez... Please write more!
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  • From Sinslayer on December 21, 2007
    great story...i actually had a tear in my eye when naruto died...ummm..oh wait...i always cry when naruto dies...i know im sappy srry >.
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  • From ANON - Shikia on November 16, 2007
    OMG amazing story with such depth to it. It made me so sad and made me smile ;___;
    I have never been one for a sad ending so i hope naruto is really ok, but it is so wonderfully done *glomp*

    ~ shikia
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on October 17, 2007
    OMG...wow that was such a tear jerker. I love this story. Those two need to have love and happiness in their lives.

    Was this a twoshot? I sure hope so.

    So beautifully written too.
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  • From ANON - Nova on September 16, 2007
    I don't know if it's fault of the music I'm currently hearing as well, but as mom said often...your work is wonderful, I feel like crying so badly!
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  • From ANON - MissMayumi on September 01, 2007
    Gah! I loved it! It was depressing though, so I might slit my wrists. Sasuke is a bastard. Naruto just loves him so much...it was extremely angsty. and we need the second part soon!! ^^
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  • From anapana83 on August 23, 2007
    I REALLY liked this fic! I thought it was so well written and i liked the sex scene just fine. It was really emotional and i kinda felt my heart break when i read Sasuke's confession on the hospital bed. You have got to add another part!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Gcbella19 on July 05, 2007
    so sad!!! please please make it a two shoot. sasuke needs naruto
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  • From cerismea on July 04, 2007
    that was great! i want naruto to live ^_^ please make it a two-shot
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  • From ANON - Artemis on July 04, 2007
    Please please please write a second! This is very bitter-sweet and lovely...
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  • From saxis on June 30, 2007
    That was great! Please, make this to be a two-shot!
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  • From Kingcobra on June 30, 2007
    Does Naruto wake up?!

    Please update this!
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