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By : sris
  • From marquesgue1 on January 04, 2007
    Oh wow - that was great, really great, I'm about to go over to the next chapter hehe. What can I say, I'm greeedy ^_^
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  • From ANON - Reily on January 04, 2007
    I only just found this story and I read the whole thing in one sitting! I especially liked chapter 3 and no not just for the smut (although it was steamy) but because of Iruka's whole inner conversation he had with himself. I kind of wish though that we had gotten a little of Kakashi's thoughts about everything that had happened was he as worried as Iruka or was he a little more comfortable with what had happened. I also liked that you didn't have them fall into all out sex right away, let's give them at least a little time to figure out what's going on between them besides it gives us something to look forward to in the story!
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  • From ANON - Hestia on January 03, 2007
    I think when I wrote my last review I had read a disturbing non-con, so I was sensitive about Iruka getting aggressive. But rereading--it does seem more like drunk playfulness. Chapter 3 is awesome--I love Kakashi worried about Iruka thinking it wasn't good. I also like the reference to Iruka's teenage "stage" with men. I love how Iruka figures out Kakashi's problem with showing his interest. Also the idea of Kakashi not being very sexually active is appealling. I loved Iruka's self doubts as well. The sex scene on the movie was so funny. This really is a great chapter--I'll be rereading this one, I'm sure!
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  • From ANON - trabeck on January 03, 2007
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was great!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more!!!!!! lol:P update soon please!!!!!!!^-^
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on January 03, 2007
    Ooh that was hot! Very, very hot! I love these two together. And Yay Iruka so the face behind the mask!!! I know he briefly saw Kakashi's face before but it wasn't the same. I really liked the way Iruka acted when the sex scene was on I though it was very IC, and his thoughts at the start too. Another wonderful chapter!
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  • From ANON - j.s. on January 03, 2007
    damn...i thought they were going to go all da way there...damn teases ;)
    im impressed at ur updating speed keep it up!
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  • From ANON - lo on January 03, 2007
    The second chapters was great too. This is really fun to read.
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  • From ANON - lo on January 03, 2007
    I like this first chapter. Nciely done.
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  • From ANON - trabeck on January 02, 2007
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!!!^-^
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  • From ANON - Hestia on January 02, 2007
    It seems a little odd for Iruka to go from considerate about K's mask to rude so quickly. It's sort of odd that there is no mention of what Iruka thought either--or didn't he actually notice K's face after the kiss?

    I really liked the line about Kaka "getting off" on upsetting Irka in Chap. 1.
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on January 02, 2007
    I love it! Its so cute, and Kakashi is my ultimate fave. That darned mask I know exactly how Iruka feels. I'm looking foward to the update
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  • From ANON - tovah on January 01, 2007
    i want some more please
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