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By : sris
  • From ANON - Cindy on January 11, 2007
    Great~! No disappointments here about the pace. A very tender make-up btn Kashi and Iru. Brava!
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  • From ANON - trabeck on January 11, 2007
    I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST KAKA/IRU STORIES EVER!!!!!!!!!!^-^
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  • From ANON - Mademoiselle_LaCroix on January 11, 2007
    ..ooh...I nearly bit my nails of during the first part.......but at least they are ok now...^^
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  • From ANON - ALD on January 11, 2007
    Good chapter, I like the part on cynicism, very human. I wish, though, that Kakashi had looked a little worse for ware. Like he was suffering so much he couldn't hide it, just like Iruka. At least that would have given Iruka a little glimmer of hope. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Reily on January 10, 2007
    (ch10) I really liked this chapter and Iruka's thought process, the way he came to the realization about Kakashi and how much he wanted him and also how he still couldn't understand entirely what had happened with Hana. I especially liked the discription of trust being broken that was very insightful. We've all done stuff that we've had to come to grips with and work out for ourselves and I thought the way you showed that was very realistic and well done.
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  • From ANON - Hello on January 10, 2007
    At least Iruka isn't confused about his feelings for Kakashi. I hope Iruka will be able to convince him.
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  • From ANON - Mademoiselle_LaCroix on January 10, 2007
    ...oh no....nonono......I new it...I could already smell it in th air........and again I am pleading for an happy ending..^^
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  • From ANON - j.s on January 10, 2007
    its seems soo sad now....*cries*
    i like how u slyly added in the title in da last paragraph...very clever
    update soon..
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  • From ANON - Silver4HENTAI on January 10, 2007
    Update pretty please
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  • From marquesgue1 on January 10, 2007
    I feel so sorry for Iruka - it's obvoius that he loves Kakashi, hopefully Kakashi will realise that as well and they'll have another go at it. Ofcourse Iruka had a point as well, when trust is broken it's a bit hard to patch the relationship back up... I think lol. Anyway, I like the way you displayed their emoyions, it was really well done.

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - ALD on January 10, 2007
    I was so mad when Iruka started to kiss her back. Then I felt so sad for Kakashi, then Iruka. Good chapter though if you can get multiple feelings from the readers. Hopefully everything works out soon. I don't like a sad Kakashi, but I hate a sad Iruka. Update soon please. :)
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  • From marquesgue1 on January 09, 2007
    Oh god - that hurt! Poor Kakashi - poor Iruka... the woman should learn to keep her hands to herself - (although Iruka is kind of hot so I can't blame her)and of course he didn't have to kiss her back... sigh. Oh well, what's done is done I guess. Nice one ^_^ can't wait for more.

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - Hello on January 09, 2007
    Poor, poor Iruka. I guess he kissed her since he's been not getting enough attention form Kakashi lately. Some people do seek for comfort from those they do not have 'intimate' relations with. :p
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  • From ANON - Andi-chan on January 09, 2007
    OMGosh!!! That was so AWFUL!!! OOps sorry I LOVE the story, but the ending to ch.9 was so sad!!!
    :[
    Okay, time for some constructive criticism...
    I have noticed a lot of grammar and spelling errors. The story would be perfect if it weren't for those.
    You might be interested in getting a beta.

    Well, I like the story a lot, so I'll keep on reading.
    =]

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  • From ANON - Hestia on January 09, 2007
    I had three or so chapters to catch up on--oh my! Some good sex there! But how sad--it doesn't seem to be working! What a sand end to "Falling"--I hope it works out--are you really going to start the New Year with a sad ending??
    But even though it was sad, it was good--thanks for the update!
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