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Reviews for Second Chances

By : MLL
  • From on September 22, 2007
    That was AMAZING! Could have done with a Lemon, but even without, it was still awsome. Great job.. Very angsty, made me cry, lol.
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  • From Rosebud on June 14, 2007
    Wow...
    Just OMG...
    I was trying my hardest not to cry when I was reading this.
    You wrote a beautiful story! And I LOVED the ending! ^^
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  • From ANON - jax on September 25, 2006
    i loved it! keep up the good weork!
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  • From ANON - lock on January 08, 2006
    OH GOD! your goddamn good in one shot! i really like your one-shot stories, you know i preferred chaptered stories but when i finished reading your story, i think i change my mind! i'll wait for your next story, til next time! (your one of my favorite authors!)
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  • From ANON - Mochi~ on January 08, 2006
    Lady Red, miss. You must be the queen of NaruSasuNaru AU one-shots.
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  • From ANON - tenshi213 on November 12, 2005
    Hmm, this fic was really good for a one shot... probably because it was, like you said, a long one shot.
    ahaha... I LOVE sasunarupairings, although I do feel a bit bad for Neji
    ^ ^"
    write some more please~
    doumo!

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  • From ANON - Sukara on November 11, 2005
    You made me cry!! xD Lol. Great story, next time don't make it so sad.....or a death fic!! xD
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  • From ANON - sephykoi on October 10, 2005
    O_o;

    Ugh... That was brilliantly done, ... but...

    So fucking painful.

    *is a NejixNaruto fan*

    ;~;

    *is saddened* My poor boy!! *glomps the Hyuuga*
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  • From ANON - hoshizora on September 20, 2005
    GREAT JOB!!! Magnificent mixing of fluff, angst, drama and romance! Write more fics like this!!!
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  • From ANON - yay! on September 20, 2005
    very nice!! really, REALLY nice!!! :D i LOVE it!! Keep writing more beautiful SasuNaru fanfics/one-shots!! Load it with romance just like this!!! Angst and happy endings!!! ^___^
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  • From ANON - illumi39 on September 20, 2005
    OMG!!! :D very nice -- a roll of angst, drama, romance, fluff and smut!!! ^____^ I LOVE THIS!!! Even though I don't really like NejiNaru, you wrote it in a way that made me not thoroughly turn the chance of Naruto and Neji being together... Though I'm still a hardcore SasuNaru fan at heart *grins* I think you portrayed Sasuke nicely -- much like the canon Sasuke, with all his moodiness, denial, silence, broodiness and secrecy [plus him running away] -- and Naruto as well, with all his indecisions and security. I find it very true-to-life!!! *happiness* Very nicely done and you need more reviews!! This is such a nice SasuNaru fanfic!!! :D Write MORE!!! Especially of this pairing that I SO love!!! XD

    Looking forward to seeing more lovely SasuNaru fanfics from you, illumi39 *heart*
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  • From ANON - coriander on September 06, 2005
    I personally wouldn't sleep with a guy who tells me that he hates me but his body betrays him. I'd kinda feel like a whore or soemthing. And I don't think that a doctor would excite a patient who just came out of surgery by having heavy make out sessions with them. But taht could just be me. Otherwise, it was pretty good.
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on September 06, 2005
    I think you did wonderfully. And you did have both in your story. Do you plan to keep this a one-shot? I think it will stand better as a one-shot, btw. Truly great writing. Am looking forward to more of your work. Ja!
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  • From ANON - shadow\'s neko on September 05, 2005
    OHHHH... nevermind my question.. i skipped a sentence =p sorry bout that. i tend to do it when i get into a story.. hahaa
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  • From ANON - sasunaru_YAOI! on September 05, 2005
    "I hate you, but my body betrays me"

    ~! Yay!!! hehehe xD i wuv that line ^___^

    nice writing style -- especially the HOT scene at the recovery room *applauds gleefully like the SasuNaru fangirl she is* molest Sasuke!!! whoop!!!!!!!! ^___________________^

    *see how wide my smile is?*

    want to see more SasuNaru from your great ideas and writing style :)

    Keep up the good work!!!
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