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Reviews for Trapped Dolphin

By : somnambulistdreams
  • From mermaid369 on May 06, 2010
    last week's episode of naruto got me in the mood for some kakairu, and I found your wonderful story. nice job!! spent the better part of a lazy day off reading it - didn't even stop to play FFXIII, and that's a hell of a compliment. hope the tale will continue soon!
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  • From serpensortia on April 29, 2010
    -Searches for fan frantically- Yeish that last chapter was hot... very very hot... and look at the clock... i work in the morning and I've decided that it is an ultimate complement from me to keep me up past 2am reading chapter after chapter when i know i work at 9am. Anyway brilliant stuff. And if your looking for a part time beta i'm up for grabs around my school/work schedule. I've got a couple of ideas

    Serpen

    serpensortia06@gmail.com
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  • From mollypocket on March 17, 2010
    Such a great story! I am so glad that I stumbled on it! It is now 5:33 in the morning and I'm sad that I've finished, even though I can now get some sleep. haha
    I will definitely check out whatever else you've written but for now I'm getting some sleep.

    Thanks for the fantastic read! This was the perfect story. Just what I was looking for.
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  • From loveusender on December 30, 2009
    This was Sooo good. i loved it! It was quite a shock to see Kakashi bearing himself so openly to someone, but that doesn't help the perverted side of him either..lol *goes to check out more stories from you*
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  • From NarutoVixin on November 17, 2009
    from what i understand Teacher-san works in the Mission Room after school lets out and weekends and holidays and half days other wise i know nothing else sorry (tho if you do read the manga Kakashi did die for a little while when Pain attacked but Pain brought him back)
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  • From edhelwing on November 29, 2008
    hey, if you still need a beta reader, i'm more than happy to help out. kristinie_balinie@hotmail.com is my email in case it doesn't show up above...
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  • From edhelwing on November 29, 2008
    welll...i'm up to date with the manga...and from the looks of it, they do make it appear that kakashi dies...he blacks out, has zero chakra, and sees his dad and starts talking to him. but tsunade has sent her slugs all over the village to help heal ppl ( the village is currenlty under attack by akatsuki) so i'm praying that a slug gets to him in time before hes gone for good. but that hasn't happened yet so i'm not sure....

    that chapter pretty much ruined my life. i hope i haven't completely ruined yours too. just remember, you did ask.
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  • From flameofthenight on November 12, 2008
    Ive been following every chapter. Im nodding of so I cant give you a proper review (sorry) but I had to pop in and tell you that I love where you're going. This is very different from the other kakairu stories Ive read and I find the emotional depth fascinating. Please continue. And please let it have a happy ending.
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  • From mizukiruhoh on October 28, 2008
    I love this story. Its so intense! :D
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  • From naracest on October 23, 2008
    Really really good so far. I'm totally hooked. Amazing character portrayal. God i loved your kakashi. So teasing, so sad. God, and some of those scenes were smoking hot! Wow! i wouldn't mind reading a lemon in this fic but it honestly doesn't need it. Really great work, first fic or not, this story is heartwrenching and beautiful.
    Cheers
    meg
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  • From naracest on October 22, 2008
    first chapter was good, very poinient. I like how you took something if find to be a little cliche (cutting) and made if very engaging and enjoyable to read. I really like this story. Okay, ch 2...you had me so terrified that i was almost wetting myself. kakashi is a very good actor! holy hell. I couldn't believe how far you went with that. BRAVO!!! Most excellent stuff. i have to keep reading now or my head will explode.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From Vague on February 28, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

    I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.

    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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  • From leanne on October 30, 2007
    wonderful! wonderful! Hope you will continue toupdate with more chapters soon! Love this story. Super great!
    sincerely,
    Jazzy
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  • From deathsangel666 on September 11, 2007
    really good love kakashi just randomly popping in on iruka, but there has been inconsistancy in the piece like if he's been cutting throughout shouldnt he still be doing it, there was no mention of new injuries or cuts for kakashi to notice i just thought about that while i was reading. it really is a good piece and i hope you continue it so i can read more. keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From morbiDreamscape on July 09, 2007
    Cute and funny... waaai! There is the slight cheese factor, but cheese is tasty. YUP. Updates would be absolutely adored and cherished like little cheese babies.

    And now that I have thoroughly traumatized you for life, adieu!
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