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By : Tatemshope
  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2008
    Chapter 3: Man, that’s gotta be hard on him, finding himself forced to sleep with his lover’s brother. . . . Oh god, that sentence was ominous: “It was at that moment that Itachi awoke and never in Naruto’s life would he forget what happened next.” (I hope his life lasts a long time, cuz I’ve read a book that said something like that and cheated.) . . . . (*stunned*) Um . . . huh? (*giggles*) That was random. ^^
    Aww, god, Sasuke’s so KYUUUUTE!! X3 (*huggles Sasuke*) . . . . (*sniff*) So cute. ó_ò . . . . I like the way Itachi uses logic to reassure Sasuke. It’s interesting. . . . Heh. Little Sasuke swore. ^^ Cute. ♥ (Reminds me a bit of some Stephen King books I’ve read.)
    Itachi’s shocked that “he was spooning Naruto.” XD . . . . For some reason, I like the last few lines: Itachi’s words and actions to Naruto.
    “Cold lips had been pressed against his own.” Huh. Why cold, I wonder. . . . So this time Itachi’s going to try to seduce information out of Naruto rather than brutally torture it out. . . . Oh jeezus, Naruto, if you can’t control your body’s actions, at least control your words! Don’t tell him to “Don’t stop” right after you say his goddamn name! Oy! õ_õ . . . . (*sigh*) Man, that’s lame as hell. Naruto, I’m beyond disappointed in you. u_u . . . . (*snort*) Good comeback to Itachi, though, Naruto. That deserved a thumbs-up. ^^ . . . . Ooh, “We don’t have time for you to be cute.” Love the typical threat in that line. =) . . . . “Think of it as a saving sacrifice.” Hmm. 9_9

    Something that I think is interesting about this so far is the humor mixed in with the angst. It helps make it bearable. And I like how neither Naruto nor Sasuke are breaking too easily. I still wonder if Neji’s okay, though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2008
    Chapter 2: So Itachi had a twin that doesn’t know about Sasuke. Doesn’t know there’s a person who’s Itachi’s little brother, or is there something about Sasuke that she doesn’t know about? I wonder. . . . Ah. She doesn’t know there’s another Uchiha. Interesting. ô.o . . . . I like the hostility between them. . . . (*snort*) He called her “Ice Bitch”. And who’s he to cast stones?
    Interesting dilemma she’s in. I’m intrigued with this character.
    Love it when Sasuke rebels. ♥ . . . . Love it when he snaps, too. ♥ . . . . Jealous? Wouldn’t that just worry him more than make him jealous?
    Heh. He knows he’s a bad guy. . . . Yup, it’s jealousy alright.

    Sasuke’s your favorite, too, eh? Cool, same here. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    Chapter 1: “Attention?” That doesn’t sound good. . . . Ouch. . . . “Uchiha will have my head [. . .]” I wonder which one. . . . Sounds ominous.
    Oh man, please tell me Sasuke and Neji are all right. >.< . . . . So he and Sasuke have been, um, in a relationship before? ♥_♥ (I hope we get to see some of that.) . . . . Uh-oh. Itachi. (*shiver*) . . . . He better be alive. (*growl*) . . . . Ahhh, and there’s the title. Eerie how the flashback ends there. Mysterious.
    Good, they’re alive. Wait — in a castle? o_o Wow. . . . So Naruto and Kyuubi merged. Cool. But what does that mean in this story? . . . . I wonder why Itachi doesn’t believe him. And I liked the line, “Apparently the hatred went both ways.” . . . . I also like this line: “He was determined to not cry out during the first attack.” It’s interesting, because he didn’t say “cry out,” he specified “the first attack.” . . . . Huh? Sister? õ.ô

    Okay, I confess! I’m intrigued! XD
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  • From Onawa on March 27, 2007
    I am really enjoying this one too! Please continue!
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  • From Onawa on March 22, 2007
    Gah! I just finished the story so far! Sigh, you haven't added a chapter in so long!!! I hope everything is going well in your life! Please continue the story - I so want to learn how this plot works out!!! I will give you virtual cookies!!!
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  • From Onawa on March 22, 2007
    Hi! I love your story so far. that was such a sweet lemon! Also, did you mean telepathic link instead of telekinetic? the former is sharing of thoughts and the second is moving items with the mind.

    Also, loved the coffee reference. I have always thought coffee was a gift from the Goddess Caffeina. She of the life giving elixer. Beware though, over imbibing that magical brew will bring down Her wrath - mild trembling, irritability, and sleeplessness....
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  • From Dream2010 on March 06, 2007
    I noticed you haven't update for a while. Please don't stop writing. This is beautiful!
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  • From Dream2010 on March 06, 2007
    This story is really wonderfully, well written, original and creative. I love it!
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  • From ANON - Jamie on September 16, 2006
    Oh. My. Gosh. I like it! Don't make Itachi die though, please. ;.; ...I just have to ask, any uchihacest going to be in this...? Hehe..

    anyway, awesome story!! It's definitely interesting and great! Keep updating!

    ~Jamie
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  • From ANON - blisblop on February 06, 2006
    Hello,sorry for delay,my computer has been down....twice!!!!!!But I wrote alot because of that,so,how do we do this...do I send it hotmail?I have about 8 yes8! At least finished and about 25 minus 8 on the go...so give me a shout,I''ll check here,please hurry as my internet connection will be gone by the &th........the utter PAIN of that.Sighs.I'll check here tomorrow.Your story is getting more and more complex...poor Itachi.
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  • From ANON - kuro-musouka on January 02, 2006
    im not all the way through this yet, but i love it so far!!! keep up the wicked work =D (i hope this comes out as sasunaru in the end ;_;)
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  • From ANON - S. on November 24, 2005
    Wow, this story is A*W*E*S*O*M*E! The second I started reading it, I couldn't stop! Well done! (I hope the next chapter is out soon!)
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  • From ANON - CP on September 12, 2005
    I read this story and I think it's great. You write so well! I love Mina, and I love the way the plot is moving. It was so funny when Gaara thought Mina was a Sexy no Jutsu'd Sasuke! I loved the part where Gaara spared the assassins, too. Most of all I love the relationship between Itachi and Sasuke and the way you've written it, from Itachi taunting Sasuke about raping Naruto, to Itachi raping Sasuke (I know, I'm twisted, but I loved it), to Itachi dragging Sasuke off and Sasuke watching Itachi deteriorate into madness and being unable to kill his brother while he was whacked out and unable to put up a fight, to Itachi telling him to leave him and meet Mina and Naruto in Sand Village. Sasuke's progressively worsening confusion about what he should do, Itachi's twisted love for Sasuke, Mina... I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - nicole on September 10, 2005
    i first read the summary and i thougth thats dum but this is a good story i realy want to know whats going to happen so keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 09, 2005
    Hey ,looking good.Gaara is responding well,Neji also.Gawd,whats with Itachi,eyeless...small sob.I have your story done,you'll have it by Sun.Have mercy.Huge smile.
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