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Reviews for For a Favor

By : Tatemshope
  • From ANON - blisblop on July 24, 2005
    For some reason I came back,who am I kidding, its" da boys",I would come back.I was just scared you were gonna torture Sasuke.I hate reading that so much that I won't but the second chapter you put up was da bomb, so yeah .Noooo.Don't go back to Star Trek!They have generations of fans.My sister was writing Kirk/Spock 30 years ago.She was always way before her time.I only ever got my hands on two of her fics...I wonder if she still has them.Itachi is attracted to Sasuke YES!Let me be one of the first to pump your ego then cause I may have bent it a bit.Sorry! but I am glad I spoke cause then you spoke and I am happy now.You write well of course and have a grip on what you see as character,your sister is not a toady so not to worry. I was moved by both her strength and her weakness.Same with Itachi.I am guessing dealing with dicotamies(sp) is one of your joys.This is looking interesting.What ever is Itachi up to?He certainly sounds like he needs sleep.I woke up at 6 am again to check the site and boom,there this was so I am too wobbly to write a half decent reveiw.I suck at spelling but there are programs for that,long -short if you can't find a beta and still want one I'll try.I love reasearch so I don't mind doing that sort of thing for you if you just need that.Any hoo ,huge amounts of luck and thank you for responding so generously to my other reveiw.I am on MSN too so feel free.
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  • From ANON - Maldroit on July 23, 2005
    After talking to you earlier I decided to come over and check out your storiy. I read the other review and I would say I sort of agree but don't agree. The non-existant sister is over done, but since I happen to have read some of your other fan fics I have an idea about who this is really based on and I can see how she might need to be there. It will be interesting to watch you try to explain away all these questions. Don't give up though! Your first story in any genre is going to be the hardest and as you get to know the charaters better you'll get to know how to write for them. I would be pissed if you take this down and start over like you said. I want to see it take off.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 23, 2005
    Ok.Just some pointers.Itachi never shows emotional responces unless it is maniacle grins when torturing his bro inside a doujitsu,his flat voice and bizzare politness and requests for people to stand aside so he won't have to kill them are his leading traits.He shows no emotion,ever.Of the ocs in Naruto you have managed to hit the one dispised the most, the non existant sister,so many have used that as a Mary Sue.There is no doubt that there is no sister.Narutos demon heals him instantly unless he is on the verge of death,it is one of his main traits he never shows wounds for long,even with low chakra he would not show minor cuts and bruises,they heal instantly.If Sasuke ever found out they,Itachi and himself, were not the last two Uchiha I doubt he would bother wasting his life as Itachi's destruction,that is the whole point of Sasukes existace,they are the last but if they are not that changes everything.The leader of Akatsuki,the group Itachi belongs to, seems to have sharingan but he is a man and again no one knows of his existance outside of the group that we know of .This fic will have to be AU there fore.To have Itachi hate Sasuke when he cared so much for him,was the only one to really care for Sasuke as children it is beyond weird that he hates him,he left Sasuke alive after killing the whole clan so Sasuke could grow strong enough one day to destroy Itachi,Itachi told him to.. so to have Itachi threaten to kill him just to get at Naruto is again bizzare.However this is fan fiction so this doesn't matter does it?I just wanted to let you know.
    I am a fan of incest between the bros which is bizzare also so there you go....there is room for everything.You write well so I am sure tons will love this .Lots of people seem to hate Sasuke too for some weird reason( he is arrogant and very cold.he will admit no friends this hurts Naruto probably is traitor ism is why,even though he is above board with his agenda) and if this is het then you indeed will have some happy readers since there are alot of yoai fics here.Good luck with your writing and beta hunt.I hope after this fic you do one where Itachi does not hate Sasuke I will be all over that .Thank you.
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