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Reviews for Stone Cold

By : onesickmind
  • From ANON - faith on June 10, 2005
    ahhhh mwhahahhahaha so awesome!!!
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  • From ANON - just_me on June 10, 2005
    As much as I would like to say: Baaaad Kakashi... I'm not gonna. I like Kakashi/Sasuke in any way possible, even rape... Damn, I guess you're not the only sick mind around. ;P And my God...on the meorial stone?! What would Obito say when he looks down from his cloud. I bet his little harp would shatter.
    Anyway, you should write a prequel to this fic. Itashi/Sasuke. Just make it a bit more sweeter. I mean... Sasuke is an eight year old kid the last time Itashi sees him and vice versa. Besides, Itachi is not as cruel as most people write him down. In all Itachi's life, Sasuke believed in his brother the most (from my point of view). Please try to keep him in character. *pleading pout*
    And for Orichimaru/Sasuke... well, I bet Orichi-sama is not going to be to rough to his new vessel. I mean, Orichi-sama wants Sasuke's body, ne? Personally I would hate ending up in a body where my butt hurts like hell.
    Anyways, enough of my babbling. Please continue writing and I'll be waiting for an update. ^__^V
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  • From ANON - empyreal on June 10, 2005
    It's definitely an interesting fic. Kakashi knows that emotional bonds make Sasuke less determined to fight Itachi, so would he use that knowledge to steer Sasuke furhter down his path of hatred, determination, darkness? If Sasuke is betrayed again, would he break, or would he become stronger? I think you set up some interesting ideas, interesting interplay between Sasuke's potential path to darkness and his fragile emotional/mental state. As for the big paragraph, you can probably break it up into severla smaller ones, esp where Sasuke says "stop"
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 10, 2005
    Assuming that this does make him change his focus (ha ha) and not just twist him so he likes rough trade.Hey great idea Kakashi.Poor Sasuke is gonna be soooo bent.However that does sound like the messed up thinking of a soldier so in that it sounds like something that would happen in a military town.Itachi might have something to say about this...Sakura wil kill Kakashi for sure if she ever figures it out.Wil lSasuke be an outlaw if he kills Kakashi? Nonsence aside this was the best rape I have read here in that the struggle was very well writteThe reason for the rape/s are conceivable even, dare one say, noble since he expects to die for his villany,umm,wait,doean't Itachi expect the same thing? Any hoo what else do you have in that inventive mind of yours? Itachi,write Itachi please or a decent Orochimaru fic.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on June 09, 2005
    OMG. That was sooooo kewl!!! XP I love the "plot twist" you had at the end -- it made me go from hating Kakashi because he was a scum bag ^^ to...erm...admiring him for his...dedication......yeah. ^^ But I really liked your descriptions, expecially the ones you used to describe Sasuke, and the "fluff" at the end was a nice touch. ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
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