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By : Mayzen
  • From mistressdragon89 on July 16, 2008
    hi i have to say im loving your story it great. keep up the good work. i was also wondering if you could send me all the pics for this story and any u may have for the sequal to stephaniejacobs@live.com.au.

    thanks

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  • From Vague on February 25, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing

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  • From oohshiny on November 04, 2007
    NICE JOBU *nice guy pose* only things you got wrong were dobe(it means dead last) and oji-san (it means old man)
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  • From WonderouslyDead on September 04, 2007
    I am going to be really really lame and say that I LOVE this fanfiction! The characters both made up and otherwise were skillfully sculpted into marvelous additions to the original characters. Thank you for writing and entertaining my mind. ^_~
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  • From RoseSakura on August 08, 2007
    dosn't kakashi teach naruto Rasengan...O.O
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  • From ANON - Bealmira on July 17, 2005
    I noticed you were floundering quite a bit with the onigiri back there in chapter four. Since you didn't know a lot about the food, it probably would have been a good idea not to do anything about it. Oh well. I feel like enlightening you.

    Onigiri is a traditional rice ball. Made from steamed white rice, it is shaped into palm-sized triangles. It's dusted with a little bit of salt, then wrapped in seaweed (or nori, if you feel like using the Japanese name) Sometimes the onigiri are filled. Pickled plums are used, or, for a sweeter taste, bean paste. Fish seasonings are used sometimes as well. Fresh fruit are not used in onigiri, so strawberries are a no, sorry. You did make a pretty good effort though.

    I love the story by the way. The summon foxes and the Kyuubi being female is great. I like you work. Make sure you check your work a couple of times before you post it, I’ve noticed a few problems with homonyms and switches of tenses. If you need a beta reader, I’d be happy to help. Good luck, and keep it up! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ezj on April 12, 2005
    The sad thing is that it's over, the good thing is
    that it were a great ending ^_^
    Well be on a lockout for more of your things.
    Oh and if it wouldn't be to much of a trouble
    could you maybe resend the pictures cause
    my anti-virus program went ballistic on me and
    tossed all mails even if I wrote them myself --'''
    It went so far I couldn't write cause the files
    couldn't be saved on the comp...
    I added a new mail that works better ^^'
    Thank you and many horrays for your wonderfoul fic ^__^
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  • From ANON - vampchic on April 12, 2005
    no!i dont want it to be over!!!
    you had better write that sequeal!
    great job on the juicyness!XD
    i would so love to see you pictures too! so please send!!
    cant wait to read more of your stories.
    until then, good luck!!!
    seriously. sequeal. better write it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2005
    ahh, its over? you had better write that sequeal!*pouts*
    and i loved that lemon.XD i loved how you made sasuke be the inexperience uke instead of naruto, like most fics.*gives thumbs up lee style*
    i would love to see your pictures,so if you dont mind.....?
    i am so looking forward to reading more stories that you have to tell. i cant wait!*glomps you*
    well, until next time, good luck!


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  • From ANON - kai on April 12, 2005
    it's over!! ;_; I'm so sad that it's over!! But i loved it and the lemon too!! XDDD Great fic!! write some more!!!
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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on April 09, 2005
    This was a very nice story in fact I love it and I want a damn lemon grrr tear I need one lol update soon with lemon

    Arry




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  • From ANON - Demon on April 07, 2005
    AWWWWW!!! update soon! this is so sweet! i love it!
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  • From ANON - vampchic on April 05, 2005
    yup, diffenetly a good fic. and the last chapter really did clear up a lot of questions.
    i am so curiouse as to what other things you will have happen next.
    i hope that some juicyness will be coming up soon:P
    cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - kai on April 04, 2005
    i got the pics!! i like 'em!! great update btw!! but i want some action!!! ^^| UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Serena on April 04, 2005
    I really enjoy readying your fic. I can't wait till the next chapter comes out. I would love to see the pictures if you would please send the m to me. My E-mail is Alexsia613@hotmail.com. If you didn't already get it.
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