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By : Mayzen
  • From ANON - daggat on March 22, 2005
    i really like this fic. it's interesting and original and your oc's actually don't annoy me in the least! keep writing and make me happy.

    just so that you know, teme does not actually mean bastard (though bastard works as amusing replacement) but it's really just a very rude way of saying YOU!.
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  • From ANON - kieshar on March 22, 2005
    wow....I so like this story I was a fraid when you asked for ideas for the next chapters that i was think Oh shit, this next one is going to suck and man it did NOT. THank you. Update soon. XD
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on March 20, 2005
    hahahaha! that's funny...i could just visualize Naruto with his angry big circle eyes and his mouth hanging open when he heard about the pranks. i love the emotions that naruto is giving off. sasuke's confusion should become more pronounced i think even with meiba's advice...maybe sasuke would get more jealous if gaara was hanging out with naruto more. i loved the part when kakashi and shikamaru chased down the bunshin, since they think that naruto has returned could there be more searches for him in the village? maybe kazan could be jealous that sasuke is spending more time on the "naruto searches" or something?
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  • From ANON - Demon on March 20, 2005
    of course i'm a fan...i love your writing it's so cool nad unique i ebjoy reading this and it make sme smile please update soon
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on March 19, 2005
    Poor Naruto! Don't cry! You'll get you Sasuke yet, just wait and see!
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  • From ANON - Ezj on March 19, 2005
    Still an absolutely thrilling story.
    I think chakara spells chakra...
    But anyway this story is really interesting
    and new spirited so continue =^_^=
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on March 14, 2005
    sorry! no ideas really! just please make sasuke figure out about naruto soon so they can... *says in dramatic voice* start building a relationship! I really loved the last chapter! It was so cute! especially with the twins at the end! great job and keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - mystik on March 13, 2005
    I really like the story so far. I don't always like OC's, but you managed to make yours in-depth and believable. In the next chapter you might want Naruto to get into a battle with and old rival, dunno who. I wanna see if he got any new skills. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Absolute-- on March 12, 2005
    Sorry, but I have no ideas as of late. My brain has already been picked by my eldest sister and myself, and I can't seem to think up any other fresh ideas. Perhaps something interesting will pop into your or my mind...*thinks*
    I think it'd be nice if Naruto was caught singing by Sasuuuuke-san...^^ Or something alond the lines of that...
    An eating contest....Naruto provokes Sasuke...
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  • From ANON - Absolute-- on March 12, 2005
    This was HILARIOUS!! *laughs*

    Naruto? Mature? Oh my...
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  • From ANON - Absolute-- on March 12, 2005
    This is a pretty interesting story. The grammer could use some work (perhaps a Beta would be in order), and a bit of the spelling was off. However, it is a rather well written story...
    On to the next chapter...

    (By the way, many people may have already informed you, but 'Dobe' actualy means 'Dead Last'...but Dumbass will suffice.
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on March 11, 2005
    I think you have already touched a bit on it. Naruto has told stories to his new family and they have imitated him. Since Naruto is a very good ninja he won't give away too many clues to his past identity but what if his new family members accidentally betray him but doing all of his old tricks? Leave a few red herrings for the Hidden Leaf ninjas to pick up and make it even more confusing as heck.
    I also like the idea that maybe Sasuke is moving on to Kazan and giving up his love for Naruto. kekeke! Corny I know but it's kinda twisted with Naruto in there.
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  • From ANON - Sukara on March 10, 2005
    Funny xD!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Demon on March 10, 2005
    UPDATE!!! i love your stories!!! please please please update soon i am addicted to your fic
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on March 08, 2005
    Man, the bold coding must have been a pain in the ass to do for the chara bios.

    Sasuke's reaction to the prank is a little OOC but I think you're going somewhere with that so it's OK.

    Update as soon as possible. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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