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Reviews for Touch of a Lonely Heart

By : GoatChrist
  • From minaaaaaaaa on September 01, 2007
    HAHAHAHAHAHA 'receive my AIDS'?????? i'm sorry but the way you put it, having him scream it out at the end was really dumb in a story i otherwise enjoyed
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  • From ANON - pwnd on January 13, 2007
    i just finished reading the other reviews you have recieved and i got one thing to say about mmost of them....
    THEY CAN BURN IN HELL!!! IF THEY OPENNED THERE DAMN ONE-SAIDED MINDS THEN THEY COULD SEE THIS IS ACTULLY A GOOD FIC. YA IT'S ANGSTY.. SO FUCKING WHAT?! ok im done yelling in blinded rage... wah that was wierd n-e-way don't keep those mean losers from you finishing this fic. ya i may hate you for making sasuke such a meanie, but it don'e matter this is a good plot. as one person said earleir i agree that you should probly have something like sauke approaches naruto and naruto gives him one hell of a bitch-slap or left hooker, and add things from there and make it slightly happier.. so now it's definte that nauto will die becouse of aids you made that clear but also it WOULD make it a little bit if you added some fluff and some aploagies. we all know naruto is to forgiving for his own good so you could make it work out. ya don't have to make him happy or nuttin but...... i don't know what to say.
    but as i said earlier good plot and stuff you should continue besides what other people say and the autumn person who said you wore the worst auther ever.. as i said before...BURN IN HELL!
    well i hoped you ah....enjoyed my revireiw, yes i know i reviewed twice but hey who cares =D update soon!
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  • From ANON - pwnd on January 13, 2007
    i like ur story even if sasuke's being a real jerkass (i say that becouse he's being so mean it would insult the donkey to give him his name and yes i did take that off of a fic. i rad on here but it fits susu-chan perfectly on this story) i can't wait for ch.3! plze update soon! oh and the fish dude if you havn't found out already is kisame.
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  • From ANON - Autumn on October 01, 2006
    you have got to be the worst author i have ever read...first of all..mixing english and japanese is wrong...dattebyo..doesn't mean anything in english..so you can't add it into english...and...calling naruto a communist slut or a pinko...makes no sense..there are no communists in that timeline...o_o wtf is wrong with you..and by all mean please insult the kyuubi by saying he coudn't cure something so trivial as aids...kyuubi can cure anything..he' a fucking demon...what medicine can't cure doesn't apply to him....please....just stop...
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  • From ANON - , on September 18, 2006
    O_o
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  • From ANON - Eris on September 17, 2006
    AIDS???!!! YOU GAVE SASUKE AIDS!!! YOU SAID ITACHI HAD AIDS!!! ARE YOU MAD???!!! EWWWWWWW!!!! NONONONONONONONONO!!!! FLAME!!! HELLFIRE!!! BURN IN TORMENT!!!! Other than that it could have been a decent fic.....
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  • From ANON - Menow on August 11, 2006
    My face is so red from that harsh slap. OOOHH...dark. Good job!
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  • From ANON - Confused on February 06, 2006
    ...k i reviewed...now what?...-_-...tehehe jus jokin, the shark dudes name is Kisame, aaawwww =P Sasu kun is possessive!!! HOW CUTE...ne I kno you like angst and all but a lil fluff never killed anyone...and don't make it one-sided...cuz den that would totally suck, pouts. Ne, why does Sasu kun hate Naru chan? And he broke him already, so can't they jus kiss and make up already?... It's gettin kinda fustrating to hear Naru chan beratiing himself every five seconds when SASU CHAN is the one who's wrong...honestly that baka needs a ...hey thats an idea...can you make Naru chan pop-em-one in the face?...or a slap, a slap is good to =P Sasu kun needs to get some sence knocked into him!!!...um can you pretty please e-mail me when you update...if you have time please please please!!!!!!! k den thankiez Ja Ne
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  • From ANON - Billy on March 21, 2005
    NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Don't stop!!!!
    I can't breath @____________________@
    need more chapters love ya -Billy
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  • From ANON - ... on March 19, 2005
    Anou..if you were only playing around,
    Ok, but uhm..Its Kishomoto
    And, wahh gomen ne, demo,
    This fic should be taken down e.e;;
    No offence but wtf..AIDS..?
    And this story is totaly out of line
    I dont mean to be a flamer but
    someone really needs to tell you so
    you dont keep making a fool of yourselff.
    I've never written a bad comment about any
    fic @_@;; But hontou ni, it needs to be kinda
    fixed..more than just a little. Thats like disgracing
    Sasuke -.-
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  • From ANON - Zaku on March 19, 2005
    Itachi's partner's name is Kisame, Hoshigake Kisame (the shark man you know?) His 7 ft long sword is named the "Sameheda" It is one of the legendary swords of the Hidden Mist
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  • From ANON - niroki kobunyoji on March 18, 2005
    It is Kisame, no? Why is sasuke such a prick in this one, huh?
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on March 18, 2005
    That is soooo sad, I hope that Sasuke bastard dies, and maybe you can have Neji come in the story and have him make Naruto better and love him. That would be so much better then what you have now, because it's so depressing. Anyway keep up the good work, and please please please add Neji to the story. I think he and Naruto make a cute couple
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  • From ANON - silverlook on March 18, 2005
    well, the shark friend is calld kisame, and plz, plz dont do ani itachisasuke (mabe rape in a flashback) but nothing else!! i hate multy pairing...-_-.....are thay going to day from aids? 0.0?....sorry for the speling
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  • From ANON - Rosemary on March 18, 2005
    The guy's name is Kisame, and I like the fic,but really no such thing as consented rape. Could proofread more, too.
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