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Reviews for Touch of a Lonely Heart

By : GoatChrist
  • From ANON - Unknown180 on March 04, 2005
    Err....Aids....Ain't that a little rough, I mean, I thought i was reading such a great story, then came the like "HAVE MY AIDS!!!" oO It....I just lost intrest in it...sorry....but I feel like alot of people dislike and iwll dislike the ending of this story.
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  • From ANON - Sukara on March 04, 2005
    Id un like you no more ._. You gave Naruto AIDS!!!! ;-;!!!!! WHY!!!!!!!!!!! WHY SO CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!! *Sobs*
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on March 04, 2005
    "Recieve my aids?!" ?!?! Don't you think that was a little uncalled for. If you didn't end the story with that particualr sentence, it would have turned out as a good fanfic. Too bad...
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  • From ANON - animix on March 03, 2005
    i've never given a bad review before and i really didn't want to, but the ending you gave was extremely unnecessary and disturbing. it's your story and you have complete creative freedom, but it MY opinion you really destroyed a story that started out great.
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  • From ANON - Shez on March 03, 2005
    W.T.F. That's all I can say.
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  • From ANON - o.O on March 03, 2005
    it was really well written...demo...er....aids?? maybe you could have presented it in a different way..."receive my aids!" shouting it after he shoots his load? its like when an anime makes a move and says it name...o.O i really felt that i was reading a good story and it suddenly came to "RECEIVE MY AIDS" that totaly went down hill man. maybe it had a good plot it but it wasn't presented well you REALLY and i believe you could have done better...it's not a flame really just totaly confused and dissapointed of the ending
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  • From mehmeh on March 03, 2005
    *blink*
    *thinks you wrote this for a piss-take*
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  • From ANON - ...? on March 03, 2005
    That was the STRANGEST ending.
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  • From ANON - Michiru on March 03, 2005
    Um... well, the last line was sort of strange. I would have somehow worded that differently...?
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  • From ANON - Mytal on March 03, 2005
    OMG pleas tell me he doesn;t really have AIDS!! pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasss!!! i liked everything except the AIDS part!! it made me feel so horrible after i read it...but the lemon is hot i love it...just the AIDS part bothering me....
    pleas write more, i would like to find out about it...
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