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Reviews for Scars of Pain

By : KinkyMonkey
  • From naruske on August 27, 2007
    OH MY GOOD I LOVE IT I WANNA SEE ANOTHER CHAPIEE PLZZZZZZZ
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  • From Keyblyder on May 15, 2007
    I wanted to start this review by yelling about how great and wonderful this story is. But after reading both chapters it seems like that would be offending. Though I absolutly LOVE this fic. And I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Keep up the good work and PLEASE O PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~ on February 06, 2006
    Very good, very angsty!
    Very appropriate cos I was feeling all down like that all day (tho not to so much of a degree)
    I like the author comment at the end...
    In an odd sort of way this is a very cute fic! ^_^
    And I hope that the past expirences u mention at the first are behind you! *warm and fuzzy bear hug*
    I had a friend that cut herself, but thankfully she stopped before she got to the stage of cutting a vien, she was still at skin when she finally got happy again...
    I really like this fic, update soon please!
    ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
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  • From ANON - Youkai Dreams on September 25, 2005
    Konnichiwa!
    Wow! I'm on a role today! I read almost three enjoyable fics ...yes, I'm picky. Get over it =D.

    Anyway, I did like the plot to this story, and I liked how you expressed the emotions and such through-out the whole thing. I must say, I enjoy sadder stories a great deal more than happy ones, just because I've been through a lot of things. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying my life is a living hell, but it isn't heaven on earth either. This fic isn't too sad for me -yes, a hardened heart can take a lot I suppose- it is a mixture of sadness and happiness, which I can appreciate if an author can combine both these things.

    Now for the dreaded part: mistakes. You know, it's funny. I don't think I've ever read a story on this site that had no mistakes in it. Well, anyway, you should consider an editor for this fic, or at least read over it a few times. There are multiple spelling, grammar, puncuation, and paragraping mistakes in this fic. I would be happy to edit this for you, if you don't mind. You don't have to let me or anything, and I'm sorry if you consider this insulting, because I do not mean it that way although I have to remember that people tend to be more sensitive than I am.

    Also, one more thing: don't apologize for what you've written. Sorry, that just pisses me off sometimes. When you write something, you write it because you like how it sounds. We read it because we like what you've written (or possible don't), so I see no need to apologize. If someone says they don't like what you've written, then just laugh it off because it's their fault for reading it (because they could have stopped), and there are many other fics to read, so they don't have to sit there and complain.

    Well, I suppose this sums it up for me. Watch out, this scary girl may try to find a way to contact you. -Be afraid. Be VERY afraid- ...I was just kidding. Hey..what are you doing with... Oh no! Wait, wai...
    STAY TUNED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO FISHYPERSONGIRLTHINGYMABOB!
    -Youkai Dreams
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  • From ANON - Kieran on March 19, 2005
    Ur fanfict was cool...a bit wierd but really good. only problem is there is no problem with cutting urself. i use to do it and i don't regret it at all.
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  • From ANON - just me on February 04, 2005
    your a awsome writer so please update soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - BrokenDesire on January 29, 2005
    UPDATE SOON! And umm...think
    about finding a beta...There's some
    mispelled words in there and I'm
    uber grammar/punctuation/spelling
    police >.< sorry! You rawk! And so
    does this angsty story! Email me if
    you'd like to talk about the beta thing.
    I tend to take a bit of a while editing
    people's writing, but I DO get it done.
    Just a suggestion ^_^. Keep up the
    super writing!
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  • From ANON - Kare-Bear on January 25, 2005
    UPDATE DAMMIT! Okay I really liked it and you must update or all hell will break-loose!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2005
    You should double check your chapters a bit more. You've confused "your" and "you're". ;)
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  • From ANON - jadetiger on January 19, 2005
    i can't stand the sight of others blood, what makes you think i can stand the sight of my own? no worries there.

    interesting fic though, usually its the other way around with naruto cuttinghimself... hmm i hope naruto spends a few nights at sasukes to keep an eye on him, "cough" cough" ;P
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on January 19, 2005
    omg! omg! i love you! iloveyousofsckingmuch!!!!!!! >_< this chapter was amazing! and you updated so fast! i loved it! normally in fics like this, its naruto that cuts and sasuke that tries to help him out! it makes poor naru-chan seen like i total... well... i gues it makes him seem like sasuke's bitch. *grins sheepishly* anyway, thank you so much for updating! please keep up the super work! (*giggles* i can't believe i just wrote that, 'super work' lol) and fast updating too!
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  • From ANON - Saki on January 19, 2005
    I really am enjoying Sasuke and Naruto's POV including what Sasuke had done to himself but how Naruto really cares for him.Please update this soon! I can't wait for the next chapter,though I feel like those two became closer after Sasuke talked it out with Naru kun.
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  • From ANON - Emina- (too lazy to sign in) on January 19, 2005
    Lovely chapter, really.
    I tried reveiwing the chapter before, chapter one, but I never got around to do it.
    I like the way this fic is picking up, the emotions, the drama, it's nice ^^
    Yeah, I can kinda relate to what you said at the very end of the fic, cutting is the worst thing you can get into. And I should know.

    Poor Sasuke, I hope you keep him cheerful the rest of the fic ^^

    Keep up with the good work ^^

    -E.m.i.n.a
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  • From ANON - Ezj on January 19, 2005
    Weee a really good chapter ther^^
    It's getting really interesting so
    I'll be waiting for the next chap =^_^=
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on January 19, 2005
    I have to say I was really sad for sasuke now. He suffured enough.
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