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Reviews for "Revelation" (Present - 5000hits on SpartanNinjas)

By : Tsukineko9
  • From Aufie on February 16, 2008
    Excellently written, one of the best fics I've ever read. Thank you. :)
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  • From naptownbaby on June 24, 2007
    i really liked this story it was very hot sexi i really liked was it just a oneshot or will there b nemore chapters
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  • From Gwyllion on March 20, 2007
    This is such a sweet and HOT, sexy fic. They are my absolute favorite couple, next to Sasunaru of course. ;) I wish you could continue this as a sequel or something cute with them. Absolutely great! Thank so much for sharing. :D
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  • From ANON - dip on June 12, 2006
    *sighs* that was just sooo... hmm, wonderfull? lol, just really nice. even nicer when reading and listenin to martina topley- sandpaper kisses... the writing was over all very solid and actions were very easy to follow and characters were pretty much IC another pleasentry >3 thanx allot for writing this!
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  • From ANON - Molly on January 19, 2006
    This i read some times ago ... just now to review ...

    hey ... this is really good ... so romantic and descent ...
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  • From ANON - eternalembrace on November 10, 2005
    Grrr.... why didnt my post work??? Ohwell, here i am again. Yummy yummy story! I love KakaIru and there sure as hell isnt enough of it in the world!!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - eternalembrace on November 10, 2005

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  • From on October 10, 2005
    i love your stories, always so cute and well-developed... with happy lemonyness at the end!
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  • From ANON - Dragon on July 02, 2005
    Absolutely, positively, HOT. That's all I can say...
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  • From ANON - Bluumberry on June 19, 2005
    Definitely the best Kakairu I've ever had the pleasure to read. Only one thing to complain was that in the "second" part of the story you didn't have the part where Iruka asked his question. It got me a little confused and I had to ponder over that part for over fifteen minutes :P Anyway, great job, you're talented.
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  • From ANON - A on June 17, 2005
    Love the story! The only thing I am going to be nazi about is your use of Japanese, which is not entirely correct in some places. But the smut made up for it. :D~ I hope you are thinking of writing another kakairu.
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  • From ANON - Tashasaphi (forgot to login- doh) on May 23, 2005
    Oh that's bloody excellent!

    Wuvvv this!

    The way you built it up, the innocence of Iruka... oh it was so wuvly and great and oh oh I love it! You write beautifully! LOVE YOU!

    When I log in, thbis is going on my favs.!

    Tsx

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  • From ANON - Inazuma on March 12, 2005
    Wow. You are just endlessly talented. *is jealous* GREAT fic! Sexy Kakashi and cute Iruka uke = happy Inazuma ^_^ Thank you!
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on February 01, 2005
    This so begs for a sequel! I wanna see Naruto's reaction if he walked in on them naked, or even worse, having sex! The ultimate horror - seeing your parents in the act! Anyways, it's a cute story! Totally aaaww inspiring! Good job!
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on January 13, 2005
    Wow this was very long, but not just with sex, lots of fuzzy feelings and romance too.
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