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Reviews for I'm not alone

By : Kinumi
  • From Sessakag on October 05, 2017

    Chapter one was good, I really enjoyed it. The hesitancy was very believeable and the pace of the chapter was nice. Great job!


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  • From moonwitch on October 22, 2007
    Great storyline. I also think the lemon was perfect. Great idea concept whith cloud city.i look forward to reading more
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  • From writer33 on September 27, 2007
    i like the story hope you update soon.
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  • From zeroharm on August 12, 2007
    ah.. reading old fanfics.. this one is fantastic but there isn't an icecubes chance in hell it will be continued. Why is it the good ones that die? :-(
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 29, 2007
    Hm, not too bad, but you forgot that it was cloud that tried to kidnap hinata for the byakugan.

    Other than that, are u ever going to write again?? It's been years since your last update...I'm about ready to hold ur funeral...
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on March 17, 2007
    Hey I love your story.. Your right about the age 12 yrs old an jumping into a relationship like that would be very hard but at least they could of been right after the time skip and they were to be attacked a bit more than I can see that.. Hope you update soon. PLEASE CONTINUE
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  • From Shadowfox32459 on February 18, 2007
    Please update don't let this great story die T-T
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  • From ANON - Nameramthgin on January 05, 2007
    Great story but its sad how you let it die man. I hate it when i see authors let good stories just drift away.
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  • From ANON - Brick Elite on January 03, 2007
    Kinumi? You appear to have spellt "God" wrong. :) Great fic, I love it. More soon!
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  • From ANON - Daratrazanoff on December 19, 2006
    Great story, keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Kilrath on December 16, 2006
    This story is pretty good so far but you stated that this makes sense best with the group being genin but at that age it would make more sense being chuunin especially since they would still be in the same team.

    All i really have to say though is keep it up
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  • From ANON - Pedromac on November 23, 2006
    Please that cliffhanger on chapter 5 is killing me. Oh well these chapters are great anyway, once again keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Pedromac on November 21, 2006
    seriously that was a spectacular 1st chapter. Teh ending wasnt that bad and you deserve a million reviews... just try not to copy the same word so much
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  • From ANON - unknown on November 10, 2006
    please update
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  • From ANON - John on October 29, 2006
    Do you still plan on updating this?
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