Reviews for Sensei-kunBy : YamiWriter |
I would suggest making the sex scenes longer and more detailed. The main reason that people look for stories for this site are for the porn (though plot is a nice bonus), and it would be appreciated if you added a bit more flavor to the lemon scenes.
Just found your story today and powered through it. Ive loved it so far. Keep up the magic!
One of the few stories that keep me coming back to this crap site don’t quit
Awesome keep them coming
why would people ask his age after seeing his dick? Is it super wrinkly or something?
why would people ask his age after seeing his dick? Is it super wrinkly or something?
Nice
Very nice first time for Hinata. I can't wait to see how long it takes Sakura and Ino to figure out what happened between Naruto and Hinata. But please let Hinata have some time together with Naruto without them joining in! I wouldn't mind Anko teaching her a few tricks to drive Naruto crazy, but let if she could get to be Naruto's sole his age girl until Wave that would let their relationship blossom more.
The only complaint I have is that the sex scene seemed force to me. Other than that good job
Nice chapter hope you update soon
Awesome chapter
can’t wait for more
please continue
yes more lemons please
Well love the lemon the hyuga having the uzamaki scroll and what he had was a twist but no more then the ending... im going to guess sakura would be next then ino
The fic was very interesting, until doing this scene with Hinata, I hope it does not become a NaruHina melodrama.
Another awesome chapter. There were a few spelling mistakes but other than that it was great. Even though the smut is awesome, I am also enjoying the character development with the three girls. Just like with hinata and her father, it was a sweet moment. Or just like Ino and Sakura starting to notice naruto more and more while at the same time trying and struggling to stay loyal to sasuke. Of course the naruhina smut in this chapter was awesome with hinata becoming very bold and confessing her feelings and Naruto excepting them gladly. The fiance part came sooner than unexpected but it was nice. 1 down 2 more to go lol. Keep up the good work and can't wait to see the next chapter
I loved the chapter when I made the challenge and had Hinata ask Naruto to help her with her stanima though sex as a way to show Hinata's pervertedness but the way you did it was genius 10 out of 10 the only thing left I have to say that ending in the this chapter Naruto's red eye I can't wait to when will you plan to do with it because I don't believe that that is the fox keep up the great work
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