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Reviews for Naruto and the brothel

By : sneaky666
  • From Gothic-Diamond on April 28, 2017

    This story should end with Pain attacking the village. Tsunade and the others should go to Naruko and ask her to turn back into Naruto and ask him/her to save the village. But Naruko responds that she's no longer a shinobi and indeed has never been, at whicj point they meet death at Pain's hands lamenting what they have done.


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  • From ANON - Zach Green on June 21, 2016
    I see it now naruto after turning back murders all of konoha oh thisll be a doozy
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2016
    Hey it would be awesome if naruto also used his male side
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2015
    Great job asswipe. You've changed one of the most masculine main protagonists into a cock whore of a chick. Thank you for ending life as the ninja world knows it. Dick
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  • From Gemini-Spark on July 09, 2015
    will kushina appear in the story
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  • From ANON - -_- on March 15, 2015
    I can't help but agree with 'Mr. Obvious' on this one. Please sort that out. If you can't edit it, then do a re-post and take this one down.
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  • From ANON - Mr.Obvious on March 13, 2015
    I won't even get into how good or bad this fic is. Mainly because I am a bit biased. I will however say that you should change the description a bit, becuse this is obviosly not a 'Naruto' fic. Naruto, as a character ceases to exist half way through the first chapter. 'Naruko' is obviously more than just a 'guise' by the end of the chapter. So, again, the description is misleading. If you want to write a 'Naruko' slut/whore/cumdump/etc fic, then lable it as such. The title 'Naruko: The Brothel Adventures' would fit the fic better. Hell, 'Naruto' shouldn't even be listed as a character, or have a place in the title of the fic. He's certainly not a part of the 'story,' a term I use very loosely to describe this fic, long enough to warrant his name being anywhere.
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  • From snake1980 on March 09, 2015
    not bad on the new chapter looking forward to see what other stuff will happen and wondering are we going to see naruko working with kurenai anko or yugao during the mission?
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  • From ANON - shinigami_shane on February 15, 2015
    You asked, for suggestions, right? Well here's one, stop using 'his' when referring to women. Since you have stated that this is a translation, it is forgiveable, barely, but it is very off-putting. Please fix it, along with some of the nonsensical grammar around the time when they are all in Tsunade's office. An easy way to test for grammatical errors is just reading it. If a sentence doesn't flow, or you think that there is something wrong with it, then there usually is. With that said, it's a good idea and I hope you continue, but after fixing up the kinks in the chapters already posted.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2015
    Can we have a chapter when naruto is out of his female fom and has a really huge break down thinking of the horrible things they made him do big enough to have tsunade visit him and calm him down or use blackmail,against him, can his male form also be used or his male form is cominng back on its self due to narutos willpower is broken? He is a male what used chakra to transform so with his/her chakra sealed his jutsu should start to fade.
    But by the end of the story it would be cool if he turned back to his original form
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  • From averagejoe32 on February 11, 2015
    Please put everything you mentioned in the note page into the story, as for characters could you please add Sakura. Additionally, for the senpai of Naruko (character of other anime), please use Ranma-chan from Ranma 1/2, a.k.a. Ranma in her girl form.
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  • From Ookami88 on February 11, 2015
    I have only one question: will there be any scene with Hinata or any other girl? I know the story is about Naruko, but I'm curious about it.
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  • From ANON - reviewer on February 11, 2015
    This is starting to sound like a badly translated Black Lilith game
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  • From ANON - Tom on February 11, 2015
    Perhaps a public sex machine event, having a machine pump huge dildos in and out of her for hours on end while a milking machine sucks her tits.
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  • From Christopher11 on February 09, 2015
    Okay, this could be a good story but it needs some proper English grammar. I was getting an actual headache trying to read the story and that is almost never a good thing.
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