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Reviews for Naruto and the brothel

By : sneaky666
  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2015
    Since you turned him into a mindless slut, konoha should suffer from not having a hero when pain or the war comes up, hell be to busy sucking cock, they finaly broke naruto and now all thats left should be a empty soulless cocksleve

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  • From snake1980 on February 08, 2015
    this story is different but not bad but I can see ino doing this way more then naruto so maybe u could do another one were ino is the one that is sent in instead of naruto/naruko? other then that not bad still
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  • From ANON - Quinnicus on January 24, 2015
    The idea behind the story is totally sexy. The plot itself is sexy, but the grammar is not. It looks like English is your second language (or maybe you just used an online translator) because your grammar and word usage are, well, atrocious. Honestly, I could get the gist of the story, and I found it incredibly sexy, but as someone who has an appreciation for the well written word, the errors kept taking a lot of my enjoyment out of the reading. My suggestion is to find someone who is English and well written and have them show you what's wrong with your grammar and word choice and how to correct it. Short of that, I don't really know how else you could improve.
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  • From Gemini-Spark on January 24, 2015
    Sexy continue
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