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Reviews for Kotoamatsukami Harem

By : Fatsho
  • From glk on May 27, 2014
    Add Samui, Konan,Matsuri and Karui to the harem.
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  • From ANON - killer on May 26, 2014
    Female Naruto, when he gets back to konoha.
    Samui.
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  • From Rixxell_Stryfe on May 26, 2014
    Boy I can tell I'll love this story already. Starting off with Sasuke using Kotoamatsukami as one of Sasuke's EMS abilities is great for a harem since you can do whatever you want and make things happen in any way you want. Take for example the mention of Sasuke using it on Tsunade, he could easily have the Hokage in the only place a Senju truly belongs. On their knees before the might of the Uchiha;) Her being the Legendary Sucker only makes such a situation all the more likely.

    Also given the nature of what canon tells us about the Sharingan, you can easily have Sasuke gain a Rinnegan through an encounter with Naruto. Said encounter could also very easily end up with Naruto becoming Naruko for the course of the story and even opens the potential idea of having a Mindscape Uzumaki orgy between Naruko, Kushina, and Fem Kurama, all of which can greatly benefit Sasuke. Take things a step farther through liberal Rinnegan usage and Kushina can get an actual body...

    As for women outside of Konoha before he returns there, you need to add Mei to the list. She was after all hitting on him at the Kage Summit arc, which technically took place immediately before this story if you're following some base from canon. This also allows you the potential idea on Sasuke getting Shisui's second eye from Danzou before his death which works well with the thought on Sasuke getting Shisui's power from Itachi. Also on that list you should add Konan since she is likely still alive. Sasuke getting his hands on a spare Rinnegan for Naruko would be nice. I'd also like to see Kurotsuchi get some playtime, but this isn't something I need as I'd rather see Sasuke return to Konoha first to begin his plans. After all, its best to get the descendents of the Sage of 6 Paths before moving on to the other women in the world. Start with the strongest potential;)

    As for women in Konoha, as I said you need to get Tsunade and Naruko before anything else. From there, I'd suggest moving on to Hinata and Hanabi as they descend from the line of the So6P as well(think Uzumaki to the Senju but in this case Hyuuga to the Uchiha). Making this include Kurenai would be super(because she could be chatting with her student and her sibling while Kurenai's child is sleeping would make for a great scene) as there are very few Sasuke/Hinata/Kurenai lemons to begin with, but the addition of Hanabi would make it something not done before. After that, finding a way to get a bijuu harem complete with all new female jinchuuriki from each village(because lets be honest, you have plenty of females to work with for making new jinchuuriki for this purpose) would be very nice. Making a female Konohamaru through the same means as Naruto would be a great way to (literally) stick it to the Third Hokage for ordering his clan to die also makes a lot of sense. Ino definitely needs to be taught a lesson about what being a Fangirl truly means(emphasis on the Fan, as in Uchiha). The Inuzuka clan needs to know the meaning of Alpha in time, a Sasuke/Hinata/Shion lemon is something I'd kill for ever since seeing the first Shippuden movie(and lets face it, Shion with her foresight power would greatly benefit Sasuke nevermind being the leader of her country), bringing back Haku from death for a Sasuke/Naruko/fem Haku is truly something I'd like and finally whats a little Ice Release harem member without adding Koyuki Kazehana from the first Naruto movie as well? God why does no one ever work on Sasuke harem stories?!?

    I just ask that you do not add Sakura no matter what, as she always gets included and hasn't she always gotten on Sasuke's nerves? Although you could add her much later on after Sasuke has pretty much everyone wrapped around his finger and she comes begging for it, but the idea of having Sakura be the lone female that Sasuke refuses to lay has more potential plot wise(because this story could be great if you gave a plot to it).

    Loved it and can't wait to see more. Have a nice day:)
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  • From Darkbladerx666 on May 26, 2014
    I like it so far, good Sasuke stories are rare, I would like to see Sasuke with Kushina she could have been ressurected by the edo tensei or maybe she never died, the same could be done with his mother Mikoto.
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  • From ANON - fff on May 26, 2014
    Terrible pile of shit
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2014
    This is pretty good so far. If we're talking about girls that aren't from Konoha, I'd like to see Temari, Samui, Mei and Kurotsuchi.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2014
    Fem Naruto as his main girl.
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  • From ANON - Irishlad on May 26, 2014
    Not a bad beginning. But there are a few spelling mistakes here and there, 'though they do not take away from the story.
    As for ideas, you could have Sasuke revive the women, (with Fu and Yugito among them), who had died earlier by using the Edo-Tensei and with his newly attained Kotoamatsukami make them sex slaves for him to use whenever he wants?

    You could even go a step further and find a way for Sasuke to release the sealed Tailed Beasts and enslave them as his submissive cum dumps?
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  • From Ookami88 on May 26, 2014
    It's an interesting idea, but could you make dialogs with "" at the beginning and end? It'll make it easier to distinguish them from the normal text.

    As for the suggestion, while from Konoha, why not Hinata? Say, she was going back from a solo mission and encounters Sasuke on her way. No, I'm not a SasuHina fan (NaruHina is my fav), but thinking about Hinata being at complete mercy of Sasuke... man that's hot!
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