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  • From ANON - Zasshu on July 09, 2014
    Naruto or/and Kushina next plz..
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  • From SpartanAlchemist on July 08, 2014
    YAY!!(kicks Unikitty off stage) Damn cat-thing. Anyways...so glad you haven't abandoned this. Its really some good stuff and look forward to seeing more. This one seemed a little more fast paced then ch1 but digged the 3some. See ya on ch3.
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  • From ANON - korrd on July 08, 2014
    This is looking like it will be an amazing fic. I do have one request though, as I saw you had Kushina and her daughter here, can I ask that the daughter be her only child? I'd prefer a fem-Naruto to a male-Naruto existing in this story. Other than that, keep it up. I can't wait to see the next few chapters. Especially the Kushina one and the Naruko one.
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  • From Ryvius on July 08, 2014
    Very nice work so far. Keep up the good work!
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  • From lobo_sangriento on July 08, 2014
    glad to see another chapter of this
    couldnt help but notice that Naruko will be here and im loving the list you got
    chapter work well oon Kurenai seeign her break before Taki and using Anko to get her was well made plan , do love the sex part having good detail and the poses i imagined them quie good

    thank h0ope to see next chapter gettign a mother and daughter combo
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  • From ANON - Spyash2 on June 22, 2014
    When is the next chapter coming? It's been 3 months already.
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  • From ANON - Cain69 on May 09, 2014
    Great story and i think Fem Naruto should be the next to get broke because of her charisma.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2014
    Well shit that was hot
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  • From ANON - nope on April 20, 2014
    Ammm, a massage definitely works for the sexually repressed and starving...
    And you've got no timeline...
    We already have Anko, so from there over Kurenai (she's not in, because of Asuma) but Hinata works, especially with Naruto not 'noticing her', Ino and Sakura could do later, but before that I want Ten-Ten.
    Damn, if I could I would have her, and only her, next. She's a prime example of sexually repressed/starved. Spandex shows a lot figure and manly muscles and the Hyuuga, well... he's Neji.
    And put Kushina on the menu too.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2014
    A lovely first chapter of a story that I hope sees frequent updates :) I love the fact that you started with Anko, she always needs more scenes. As far as a suggestion for next girl, I'd suggest Hana Inuzaka (Kiba's older sister). Not only is she hot, but you can then believably branch out into the younger kunoichi via Hana telling Kiba about the new masseuse for women and Kiba then telling those around his age like Hinata, Ino or Sakura while potentially continuing with the older kunoichi if you so wish.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2014
    Mikoto Uchiha is a must.
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  • From ANON - Guest on March 17, 2014
    It'd would be nice if the next girl was Hinata or Sakura, and either of them ended up cheating on Naruto.
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  • From Argorok on March 17, 2014
    Do Kurenau Yuhi.
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  • From Chaoslegion on March 17, 2014
    magnificent. the only thing regretable is that it's an OC but the OC's personality is deliciously evil.
    i can't say more about the story with only one chapter so GIVE US MOOORE...

    recomendations, um fron konoha yugao uzuki, kurenai, hana and tsume inuzuka. Just don't do any fron the konoha 12

    untill next chapter. :D
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  • From NightEye on March 17, 2014
    Who would I like to see here? Uhh, let's see... Yakumo, Tenten, Shizune, Ino and Hanabi. Isaribi too, I guess, along with Tayuya and Fu if you can find a way to swing 'em.
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