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Reviews for Naruto's Spy Network

By : EroMind
  • From ANON - Eric on June 11, 2013
    I think you should add Hinata for her clan and the fact that she is one of the hottest ladies of the Naruto universe.
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  • From longshot0 on June 10, 2013
    Hot dame I think that was one of the best lemons ive seen . I say keep going I dont think anyones tried a story like this
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  • From ANON - djdjd on June 10, 2013
    You need to read over your work more carefully, there are multiple errors of out of place and repeated words through the story, nice work other than that though
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  • From ANON - jdjd on June 10, 2013
    How did it go from his dick being in her face to him approaching from the other side of the hot spring?
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on June 10, 2013
    Good start to this story. I liked the set up and very good descriptive lemons. I do hope that Naruto will grow stronger on his own despite the perverts lack of teaching.
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  • From ANON - korrde on June 10, 2013
    Great story. That was amazing. I'd love to see one with Karin. Heck maybe Karin and Tayuya. If you could retcon it, maybe femHaku too.
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  • From ANON - anon616 on June 10, 2013
    I'd love if you could work in Naruto's superiority to the Raikage and/or Killer Bee to this story. Like maybe Mabui has been with one or both of them and is a certified size queen, but then Naruto comes along and totally outclasses them in both size and skill.

    Also, maybe include Karui? And a line similar to "make me a black slut for that huge white cock". ;)
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  • From ANON - andy on June 09, 2013
    i like it continue
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  • From ANON - Mathew on June 09, 2013
    Nice, I hope to see Haruna, Tsunami, or Koyuki in the next chapter. This was well written and I don't see that much of them. Hope you can update again soon.
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  • From kotkas24 on June 09, 2013
    Great start,hope to see the next chapter soon
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  • From ANON - lordamnesia on June 09, 2013
    Very nicely done! Your writing is actually fairly high end, no mistakes that I caught, and sentence structure and all that jazz was spot on! The quality of the lemon was fairly high as well, so 2 thumbs up man! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Hugo0974 on June 09, 2013
    ood fic, very exciting!
    But, although I have liked, I have some suggestion for you to improve further the story.
    Describe the female genitals. You described Naruto penis very well, but not spent even a line in the Samui vagina. Describe the pubic hair, both in "hairstyle" and color. Also talk about the vaginal lips and clitoris, it certainly left the narrative even more exciting.

    Well... Keep up the good work!
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  • From lobo_sangriento on June 09, 2013
    Excellent story Samui was placed fantastic here with her resistance slowly being crushed by Naruto


    do hope to see Mei Terumi soon she needs some love and also Tsunade but im looking foward to have Konan or Shion here
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  • From ANON - x on June 09, 2013
    not can do a harem fic without hinata if incluyed konaha girls from the other maybe shion and kurotische granddauter of kage form iwa tayuya and kin from oto
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  • From ANON - Rikimaru on June 09, 2013
    This is definitely as good as Ero-Sennin's, less plot, but more smut! Who cares about plot anyways when you just want to read a fine HOT smut about the characters you love. So it's great!

    Please choose Konan as next, she's so terribly underused in smuts!
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