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Reviews for Heart-Shaped Box

By : JazzyBell
  • From ANON - Lynxx on August 25, 2012
    Los it hope to see more smut and how they deal with this dilemma that their in! Hope to see more soon!
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  • From sundance1989 on August 15, 2012
    great chapter! i cant wait for the next chapter, this is truly a unique story update soon please!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on August 12, 2012
    Lovely. That was simply a lovely piece of writing. I love Kakashi's POV here and it was such a beautiful discription of pleasure and guilt . . . wonderful. Looking forward to more. ^_^
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  • From sundance1989 on August 09, 2012
    wow this is such an good story i mean i feel bad for sakura and kakashi but the story line is very good please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2012
    would it kill you to get through an entire scene in one post?
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  • From scriptease on July 19, 2012
    Like it. Keep up the good work.

    The writing's decent and the characters are true to themselves.

    The only criticism I have for the latest chapter is the length. But that's just me being greedy for wanting more. :P

    I really thought this would be chapter I'd been waiting for!! Looks like it's going to be the next one. Almost there~
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  • From MisatosPenPen on July 15, 2012
    *Happy squeal of delight!* I'm soooo looking forward to the next chapter. No pressure. ^_^
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  • From kagasaki6 on July 13, 2012
    Kakashi seems angry with her...he must think that the seduction she unknowingly gave was deliberate on her part. Now that they are alone, will he change? His anger, and the fact that he didn't drop the act after they're alone makes me wonder if he wants to teach her a lesson and make her lose her virginity while still pretending to be a stranger with henge. Unknowing that Sakura already recognized him. I am most eager to see what happens next! On a side note, I must add, that Kakashi is a horrible sensei and if Sakura sucks it's because he hasn't taught her. Same with Naruto, he's improved because he's made himself improve. Kakashi only taught tree walking and group exercises and supervised sparring. Still, will he find himself attracted to her? Sakura is an exotic beauty...and they are all alone. Will he fuck her?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2012
    longer chapters would be nice. The wait for the kaka/saku lemon is starting to get irritating. I've been waiting and constantly checking for updates for months now.
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  • From MisatosPenPen on July 02, 2012
    So happy to have Kakashi on the scene! Can't wait for the uncomfortable, but no doubt satisfying, sex scene between them.
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  • From MisatosPenPen on June 20, 2012
    Ooooo. That last sentance is so intriquging. And now knowing that there will be a sequal with Itachi . . . excitment rises.
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  • From ANON - reader on June 08, 2012
    Very interesting story! Got more depth than most of the stories you'd see around here. The way your characters are written make them well rounded, and the premise of the story itself is intriguing, not just your typical sleazefest!

    Carry on please!!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on June 07, 2012
    *Hopping in her seat in antisapation!* You know what would be absolutly fantastic? It it was Itachi to yanked Sakura into that room, shocked recongizing her. Can't wait to see who it really is! So nice to see Kakashi again.
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  • From MisatosPenPen on May 31, 2012
    Oh, I'm sorry to hear about your niece, but I'm glad she'll be alright. ^_^
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  • From MisatosPenPen on April 25, 2012
    Gaaaw! You're killing me!!! This is a great story, not a pairing I usually go for, but the story and scenario intrigue me. Longer chapters of something! This is really great. I sooo can't wait for the first . . . encounter.
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